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Messages - Azraq

#1
buy a terrarium, some frozen mice, maybe a few stylish rocks that the snake might like.  it's cute!
#2
Critics' Lounge / Re: Critic on painting
Thu 24/09/2009 13:25:35
you could add some midground elements along the roadway to help cement the scale a bit.  to give the eye something to follow to make sense of why it's winding around the way it is.  some rocks, bushes, signposts, ect.

little details to give those rolling hills a sense of proportion and depth.
#3
Critics' Lounge / Re: Little Miss Mushroom
Thu 24/09/2009 13:17:38
She could really some some beefy calf muscles in there!  8)  her legs are thinner than her arms, or at least about the same.  that's kind of strange.

you wouldnt need to thicken up the whole of her legs, but some curves in the calf region would look cool I think.
#4
I think the colour of the hospital gown is fine, the only reason it seems radioactive and glowing is more to do with the outlines being so close to the same colour.  darken them a few shades maybe?  also his head looks kind of small - or his body too large, which ever is more appropriate.  It kind of emphasizes his body even more than it should.  If was even scalled up like 2 or 3 pixels from that it is now it would be great.

a bonus of have a slightly larger head would mean a much bigger (pun) range of expression for any talking or head animations.  certainly couldn't hurt for bringing the character more too life.
#5
Adventure Related Talk & Chat / Re: The THUMB
Thu 17/09/2009 12:46:11
How about something like a joystick?
#6
hey there, I wanted to give this a try, but I ran into some problems opening the game?

I'm not familiar with this 7-zip format so maybe this is what's going on.

I open the exectuable file and I get an error telling me that it is not possible to open it as an archive?  Not really sure what to make of that.  Any suggestions would be appreciated.
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