Wow, great stories here!
Very short general reviews:
Mandle:
Creamy:
Sinitrena:
Baron:
And my vote:
Very short general reviews:
Mandle:
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It's interesting how the story transforms a supposedly school reunion involving a pretty dysfunctional family (Simon is a jerk) into a tense revenge thriller, blending everyday life with a dark altered reality. Yeah... it's atmospheric, impactful, and features a somewhat complex antagonist showing unexpected humanity. However, I feel it's a bit confusing at times.
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Creamy:
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I like the Kafkaesque nightmare vibes. In that way is intresting how the justice system turns "uncanny", distorting responsibility and identity until the narrator becomes a victim of the very process they kinda "trusted". It made me wonder whether the narrator really forgot Mary Smith or if he's been lying from the very beginning.
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Sinitrena:
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Thanks to the section "Separating Fact from Fiction," we know that this story is derived from a real memory of local parade. What's interesting, then, is how Sinitrena works on that memory and transforms it to explore an extreme and tragic version, in which the event takes a catastrophic turn and the protagonist sacrifices herself to save her students. Although the language is clean and straightforward, there is skillful use of repetition—a careful craftsmanship in form. The ending is stark, brutal, but deeply... human.
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Baron:
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Reality Check was apreciated. That said, what I like—and what I think makes the story stand out—is that reality isn't altered through extreme fantasy, but rather through a hyperbolic literary version of a situation that is, at first glance, realistic. It's a distortion of the real into the absurd, the comic, and once again like other stories here, the chaotically human. The family dynamic is well portrayed with just a few strokes: the sarcastic teenage daughter, the exhausted wife, and the optimistic, stubborn father. A family that, in the end, survives thanks to sarcasm as much as to blankets.
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And my vote:
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Very very hard decision... but 1st: Baron, 2nd: Sinitrena. Creamy was very close to 2nd... a tough tough decision indeed.
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