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Personally, I think you should do your own art, using something like this for inspiration.

I don't know. Second picture it's something hard to draw, and the way you did it makes it easy to see what's going on at a first glance. Unless that's not supposed to be a guy in casual clothes on the top of a coffin, 'cuz that's exactly what I'm seeing here.

Still, if you want to improve it...  I would say that the biggest problem are the armpits: they don't arch like that. Actually, relaxed upper arms are usually well stuck to the torso.

Something like: