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#1
I had a go in a smaller scale, hows this little guy look?

#2
Quote from: Evil on Thu 31/07/2008 21:16:47
Well, there definitely needs to be more frames. It may be alright for low res, but for something this large, there really needs to be more frames. Her legs are moving correctly, but her arms and swaying a bit much and her hands are going crazy.

The character looks really good, but her knees are low. Or her shins are short. One of the two.

I'm not sure what the front view looks like, but the area above her breasts is sticking out a bit far. Maybe she's got them crammed in there and they'd do that, but the bump would be lower than where it is now.

The "area" above her breasts i think you're referring to is a disk shaped medallion :P

I think its not that her shins are too short, maybe her thighs are too long?

Anyway, I think I'll go for lower resolutions
#3
probably cos i wasnt paying attention to them and they went everywhere :P
#4
Critics' Lounge / Critique wanted for walkcyle
Thu 31/07/2008 20:16:52

Hi everyone, I'm finding walk cycles very frustrating and would appreciate some pointers.  There always seems to be something kind of "off" about my walks. I always seem to make the same mistakes, I get leg drag and things like that :P



I dunno maybe she's too clunky...

all crits welcome :D
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