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#1
Critics' Lounge / Re: A Detective
Wed 25/08/2010 05:03:09

I hope this help... ;D

His right hand now is fixed...
#2
OK, this is my finished work...
What do you think?
Thx to all
#3
Thank´s to all, for your suport... tomorrow im going to upload the new mods i made.
thx again
keep doing critics
#4
yes Evil, the runes are made by my self... im glad to read "awesome" but it´s too much
keep doing critics
thx
#5
http://yfrog.com/jpbackground003p
http://a.imageshack.us/img709/4216/background003.png
http://img709.imageshack.us/shareable/?i=background003.png&p=tl

thank´s to all of you, i changed a few things in this one.
i start to think, there is imposible... hahahahaha
thx
keep doing critics
#6
Quote from: Mad on Mon 16/08/2010 17:11:56
started to make a paint-over and noticed that Monsieur OUXX  already pointed out a lot of things I wanted to convey:



I also tried to tighten your colour scheme, because some of the colours really clashed, imo.; especially the plants in the foreground with the bushes behind the skull. Unfortunately, my take on it turned out a bit dark and I have not got the time to tweak it anymore.

Some of the lighting on the rocks is a bit jumbled and confusing, but as I said no time anymore...

Hope it helps, nontheless!

that was awesome  :o, and i dont know what to say, now i feel like a 2 years old kid hahaha...
im going to remake the skull, trying your way.
thx a lot, and you like the others are helping in a very good way.
keep doing critics
#7
Quote from: Monsieur OUXX on Mon 16/08/2010 11:44:37
I think there's a major issue with the original drawing and most of the paint overs. It's been bothering me from the beginning.

You've got to choose what kind of surface to "apply" to the skull.
It seems like you can't decide whether you want it to be shiny or not.

- If it's shiny, then you must also draw the cracks as if they were cracks made ina  shiny material.
- It it's not shiny, then you must stop drawing reflection effects that are inside of the skull's outline but don't reach the outline.

A picture is better than 1000 words :



EDIT: I think that's what Khris was trying to address when he made shading suggestions, only in a more arty and diplomatic way than I did. :D

You are right, somtimes i can´t decide how to finish the job, hahahaha i think that is because im new and i have no experience, btw i like the people who critics in a good way.
so now im going to change a few things to improve the skull.
thx a lot
keep doing critics
#8
Quote from: Dualnames on Sun 15/08/2010 19:28:26


It's not as polished as it could be, but it should point some stuff.

First I'd prefer for the skull to have those cool symbols, and secondly it could be glowing. I also did pixelate it some much. And also forgot to paint over the plane on the left and on the right, so you can see some colour gaps there. I could go and have indirect lightning on the bushes (as the ground seems to have).

It's just an idea on the table, it may as well suck ass.

Thx dualnames, the glow FX is awesome, im gonna to try and see what happens, i promise the return os the symbols  asap.
thx again
keep doing critics
#9
thanks for the instrucctions, so tell me what do you think now...

#10
Quote from: Khris on Fri 13/08/2010 17:49:27
Very quickly done shading suggestion:




(click to view actual size)

Thank´s Khris, now looks like stone, im gonna take your advice and see what happens.
Keep doing critics.
Thx
#11
Quote from: Khris on Fri 13/08/2010 11:20:04
I'm a bit irritated by the glare on the skull. Isn't it made of rock?

Hello, in the 2nd or the 3th picture or the glare on all of those?
Thank´s for your help.
keep doing critics...  ;D ;D ;D
#12
Quote from: Sughly on Fri 13/08/2010 10:07:23
Yeah I'm sorry homerus, I think cianty's right  :( I think the second pic suits your style more. Like I said, I'm no expert  :P

Don´t be sorry, but now im a little confused, about the third picture... hahahaha keep doing critics cos it´s a way to learn.
thank´s
#13
I clean the image a little more... thank´s for your opinion please, keep doing critics.  ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D
#14
THX´s
From now, no more LEGO hahahaha, what do you think about de blue tint?
Thanks
Homerus
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