I am currently working on a game called "Wishful Thinking". I originally designed the story to fit this month's guidelines for MAGS, but during the working progress the story became more and more complicated. So I decided to forget about MAGS, but make a nice medium or full length game out of it instead.
The game tells the story of Burt, a fat and lazy fairy who still lives with his mother even though he is nearly 30. One day his mother decides that it is time for Burt to look after himself. She throws him out of their house until he has found himself a proper job. With no other choice than obeying, Burt starts working for a company called "3 Wishes Corporation". He is sent to all kinds of customers who are all unhappy in some way and has to grant them three wishes. Of course he doesn't like this job at all as he is the absolute opposite of the common fairy godmother we all know from so many fairy-tales. But he has no other choice.
One day, as he is sent to a former prince who was banned by his father, he breaks his wand on the trip. Unable to use any magic to fulfil his customer's three wishes, namely to be king with a crown, a palace and a bride of his own, Burt has to find other ways to make these wishes come true...
I have already made several backgrounds:

This is where Burt lives with his mother.

This is at "3 Wishes Corporation".

This is the hill where Burt meets the prince.
And this is Burt:

And this is Burt walking:

So what do you think about it? Anything I can improve about the story or the graphics? Suggestions, ideas, critic, comments, paint-overs - everything is more than welcome. I've been working on this stuff for so long now that I'm beginning to lose my judgement on it completely.
Thanks in advance
mornin :
The game tells the story of Burt, a fat and lazy fairy who still lives with his mother even though he is nearly 30. One day his mother decides that it is time for Burt to look after himself. She throws him out of their house until he has found himself a proper job. With no other choice than obeying, Burt starts working for a company called "3 Wishes Corporation". He is sent to all kinds of customers who are all unhappy in some way and has to grant them three wishes. Of course he doesn't like this job at all as he is the absolute opposite of the common fairy godmother we all know from so many fairy-tales. But he has no other choice.
One day, as he is sent to a former prince who was banned by his father, he breaks his wand on the trip. Unable to use any magic to fulfil his customer's three wishes, namely to be king with a crown, a palace and a bride of his own, Burt has to find other ways to make these wishes come true...
I have already made several backgrounds:

This is where Burt lives with his mother.

This is at "3 Wishes Corporation".

This is the hill where Burt meets the prince.
And this is Burt:

And this is Burt walking:

So what do you think about it? Anything I can improve about the story or the graphics? Suggestions, ideas, critic, comments, paint-overs - everything is more than welcome. I've been working on this stuff for so long now that I'm beginning to lose my judgement on it completely.
Thanks in advance
mornin :
