Hey!
Ok. You don't like to compose helm's comics? What a bummer! It would have been killingly funny. But ok, i'll change the topic. Try to use FX and stuff again, try to use different voice and put in some music, if you like to.
This time it'll be:
Setting: Nasty & Duke are both very rude biker guys. They use to crack bad jokes and kill people in jest. They live in a cave with several computers and electronical stuff. In the above-named episode they're up to rob a bank.
N: Everybody be cool, this is a robbery!
D: Shut up everyone or I'm gonna blast the crap out of you!
(people crying, both walk up to the counter)
D: Good morning young man! Don't mind me and my little friend here. Just take the damn money and put it into the bag. Fast! And don't try to fool me or i'll break every bone in your body.
Clerk: Yes Sir, yes Sir!
N: Faster! It's time for the bank to pay back their owe. Eheherrrr!
(a police siren is heard outside)
D: Damn! The police! Hurry up you lazy bum or I'm gonna shoot the hell out of you!
N: Come on Duke! Time 's money! We have to get out of here!
(one guy tries to run away, nasty shoots him dead with his machinegun, the remaining glass windows burst, people crying)
N: Freeze! Hrhrhrheer!
D: Stop crying everyone or i'll nuke this place! (to the clerk) Thanks for money!
(Both sit down on their bike; the whole spot becomes silent, nasty puts the key in, the motor howls, but doesn't turn on, he tries again and again)
D: What the hell is worng? Gimme fuel! Gimme fire!
N: Out of petrol!
D: Never mind, let's have a walkaway ...
N: Aye!
I hope you like it this time. I'll chose a winner at the end.
Greetz:
Loki
Ok. You don't like to compose helm's comics? What a bummer! It would have been killingly funny. But ok, i'll change the topic. Try to use FX and stuff again, try to use different voice and put in some music, if you like to.
This time it'll be:
- Nasty & Duke: Episode 1: Jokes & Terror -
Setting: Nasty & Duke are both very rude biker guys. They use to crack bad jokes and kill people in jest. They live in a cave with several computers and electronical stuff. In the above-named episode they're up to rob a bank.
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(Both, sitting on a bike, crush through the big glass window of the bank, firing their guns in the air)N: Everybody be cool, this is a robbery!
D: Shut up everyone or I'm gonna blast the crap out of you!
(people crying, both walk up to the counter)
D: Good morning young man! Don't mind me and my little friend here. Just take the damn money and put it into the bag. Fast! And don't try to fool me or i'll break every bone in your body.
Clerk: Yes Sir, yes Sir!
N: Faster! It's time for the bank to pay back their owe. Eheherrrr!
(a police siren is heard outside)
D: Damn! The police! Hurry up you lazy bum or I'm gonna shoot the hell out of you!
N: Come on Duke! Time 's money! We have to get out of here!
(one guy tries to run away, nasty shoots him dead with his machinegun, the remaining glass windows burst, people crying)
N: Freeze! Hrhrhrheer!
D: Stop crying everyone or i'll nuke this place! (to the clerk) Thanks for money!
(Both sit down on their bike; the whole spot becomes silent, nasty puts the key in, the motor howls, but doesn't turn on, he tries again and again)
D: What the hell is worng? Gimme fuel! Gimme fire!
N: Out of petrol!
D: Never mind, let's have a walkaway ...
N: Aye!
***
I hope you like it this time. I'll chose a winner at the end.
Greetz:
Loki
