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#1
Critics' Lounge / Character improvement
Thu 26/10/2006 22:40:17
Hey everybody,
I've got a problem :

I did a front walkcycle of a character and then I also did a side walkcycle of that
character, but I'm not quite pleased with my outcome of the second walkcycle.
So if you'd please take a look at it for me and tell me whats wrong.

I'll post both walkcycles here.
Those two gifs are flash exported, so please don't mind the strange colours.


I think there's something wrong in his posture, but I've just been looking at it for such a long time ...

OK. I'd be greatfull for any advice.
By the way, how's it about posting swf files on this forum ?
#2
Critics' Lounge / Scene Improvement
Tue 09/05/2006 13:58:26
First of all I'll give an explanation to this scene.
The main character is landing in a huge... tree with a parachute.
Now he's hanging on the parachute straps in the very top of this tree.
I chose a perspective a little top of the place,where the character is supposed to hang, looking down on him and the tree.
With this perspective I wanted to improve the dramatic effect of the scene ( in other words I wanted to make the tree to look bigger and higher :P ).
But I'm still not pleased.
Here the scene:


And here how the character is supposed to hang in the tree:


I would be happy about some advice. :)
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