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#1
Critics' Lounge / PixelArt - Male Template 1
Wed 07/08/2013 05:32:06
I'm not really a pixel artist, so I coming here and asking for advice. :) I want to make some templates that I will later animate (And I may share those.) So any advice you can give would surely help. This sprite isn't very tall (About 4 heads), and I'd like to improve anatomy, then later I will make a female, possibly a child, and someone a bit bulkier perhaps.

Anyway, Thank you! :)

[imgzoom]http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b74/eternal_renegade/MaleTemplate-001.png
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EDIT(8/8/2013):
[imgzoom]http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b74/eternal_renegade/MaleTemplate-001-2.png[/imgzoom]
#2
Critics' Lounge / Sketchy-Style Walkcycle
Wed 13/08/2008 09:30:12
Well I am going for a painted-sketchy effect on the way the movement works. This was done with a tablet, would definitely appreciate criticism or comments.



I'll try different walks too with different characters (Might actually design a game out of this in this style!)

Does this need any changes? Would love opinions as well.
(Oh and there is a reason to the transparent in-between frames, I believe it helps define the messy style a bit more and smooths it out in an abstract way)
#3
Critics' Lounge / Few Lo-Res Characters
Fri 25/07/2008 23:31:06
These are a few characters I made recently, just experimenting with color, shapes, and sizing. Criticizing is certainly welcome. :)
And thoughts/ opinions are too.





I don't really know what I am going for, somewhat western maybe.
#4
Ok so I am really starting to get involved, slowly however. Anyways I can get away with this walkcycle and I know it can be improved (feels so basic) , so yeah C&C time!



x2:


Here is an update:




x2:


Update 02:
Added more frames and some motion


X2



I will work on this portion for now and move on to other angles when the time is right.
#5
Well this is my first actual background. I have been pretty pleased with it and may have found another skill I have besides music. I am looking for C&C basically any advice you can give me in anyway.

But I  am not the best when it comes to lighting, I am able to deal with shadows but I'll just show you what I mean.
I attached two images:

Lighting:
http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b74/eternal_renegade/DevonRoom01-2.png

No Lighting
http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b74/eternal_renegade/DevonRoom01-2NoLights.png

Also just doing this for practice, but now I am inspired to possibly make a short little game based off of this room. :)

EDIT:

Fixed Lighting and Touch-ups:



EDIT 2:
Now with wall textures and added blood! :)


**Update: Added a character for test, although I am thinking that I like this character's look.**
Looking for possible critiques on character  style, lighting may or may not completely match this backgrounds lighting but I am trying to create a character that would match different levels of lighting, so I chose a level of intensity that was between light and dark.
Just as well, having a colorful character both in looks and in personality in dismal situations is my motivation.





#6
Critics' Lounge / Mr.Elf and Notebook
Thu 19/07/2007 09:22:56
Alright, well here are a couple things I made. I am looking for criticism. I am just trying to get better at this sort of thing!












#7
Critics' Lounge / Some Mp3s
Sat 17/02/2007 19:56:09
Well I made these over the past few days, hope you enjoy them! and criticism is definitly acceptable.

http://media.putfile.com/03overworld

http://media.putfile.com/01Horror

http://media.putfile.com/Sad-and-Alone-Remix
#8
Critics' Lounge / Critique on Happy Song
Fri 28/07/2006 19:12:58
this song is for the game I am making about a baby turtle. This song is for the main area of the game, the cliffside. I am looking for some criticism. (sorry if I don't change this song, but what I do is I use the criticism in later songs)

http://media.putfile.com/Cliffside
#9
Critics' Lounge / Only a Dream- Song
Fri 14/07/2006 06:01:39
Yah this is going in a Mystery/Horror/suspense game that I am creating. It's going to go through a few changes but tell me what you think or give some critiques!

http://media.putfile.com/Only-a-Dream

EDIT:
here is an updated version:

http://media.putfile.com/Only-A-Dream-16
#10
Critics' Lounge / Silenthill Style song
Sun 09/07/2006 10:13:46
Well actually I am composing some music for a silenthill fangame (please do not flame me, Im not making the game, just making the music) and well I wan't some c&c on this song:

http://media.putfile.com/Sad-and-Alone

here's a variation with the main instrument:

http://media.putfile.com/Sad-and-Alone-80

Another Variation:

http://media.putfile.com/Sad-and-Alone-50
#11
General Discussion / This Scares Me lol
Wed 05/07/2006 01:39:14
No seriously, I don't know what it is but for the past few months I have had strange things happen to me in my room, and only when I am in my room. I'll go to sleep, but while in my dream state I will open my eyes (a friend of mine was also in the room when one of these things happened) I can see everything quite clearly, so I know it is not a dream, I cannot move I feel trapped. But I can start to see things while in this state that actually effect the room (like I seen things coming through the walls that scared the livin' crap out of me)

Do any of you know what this could be?
#12
Critics' Lounge / Character- Regular Guy
Wed 05/07/2006 00:57:08
I tend to try and be simplistic, this is however is the only character I am pleased with that I created. Really it's my first actual sucessful character, now I am looking for some C&C on it. Thank you!



#13
Critics' Lounge / Tribal Music *And* Mystical
Wed 24/05/2006 03:52:12
Yep still looking for criticism, lately I have been bored with making music, maybe I should take a break, hard to break habit though lol. Well give me your thoughts!

http://www.2dadventure.com/ags/tribal.mid

EDIT:
http://www.2dadventure.com/ags/Follow_the_Bread_Crumbs.mid

here is the mystical forest one, whcih if you are able to give some criticism on, thankyou!
#14
Critics' Lounge / "It's Not Over" Midi
Tue 16/05/2006 03:14:28
Well I am looking for criticism so yah here ya go:

http://www.2dadventure.com/ags/It's_Not_Over.mid
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