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#1
Critics' Lounge / Imperial Flag
Sat 08/09/2007 02:51:46
Hello,

This is the Imperial Flag for a sci-fi type country/world.

Please tell me what you think.

* Aesthetically - good/bad? Geometry, proportions, colors, etc.
* What does this flag communicate to you? (i.e. emotions like fear or happyness, concepts like power or diplomacy)
* How can it be improved?
* Is the flag suitable for the type of setting I want to use it in?
* Any other feedback

Thanks!


#2
Hi,

I can't draw women. I've tried many times and it always ends up looking messed up.
This is not my first attempt.
Constructive feedback and paintovers/edits would be greatly appreciated.


Notes (these are just some notes, please dont limit your constructive feedback to these points):
1. I don't know how to draw hair. I was just messing around and got something that I sort of like (sort of).
2. Face - as you can tell by the rest of the picture, its kinda on the downlow when it comes to details. Whenever I do faces they always suck.
3. I dont know what I'm doing with the arms either. Especially the girl's right arm (your left). I kind tried to make it look like its going behind her back but again thats why its not detailed.
4. Hips - I know they are asymmetrical... That was my attempt to show the pose she is standing in
5. Feet - I dont know what to do hear either. I was trying to make show her feet with toes pointing towards the camera.
6. I made this in MS Paint and edited it slightly using another program. But I dont think its worth it to use another program until I get the basics down correct.
7. I don't know how to do the coloring or shading either. Ive tried before to take a pen and paper drawing and scan it and try to color using a graphics program, but it always looks messed up.

Thanks in advance and looking forward to constructive feedback.

- cReative
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