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#1
Critics' Lounge / Re: Help for a newbie
Sun 14/02/2016 06:02:23
This is brilliant, thanks so much. I've already looked at a lot of tutorials on it but I've never seen how it can be used for pixel art, your examples are great! You should consider writing a "how to article", your graphics look amazing :)
#2
Critics' Lounge / Re: Help for a newbie
Fri 12/02/2016 14:55:07
Quote from: loganworsley on Fri 12/02/2016 00:53:54
Definitely great for your first background. I would definitely think about proportions. For example, the space between the door and ceiling is about as high as the door itself...usually that is a much smaller space. Also with the floor that big it will cut back on realism.

But regardless, this is far better than the first background i drew.

If you haven't done so, try using perspective lines as a guide. I can post a. Example if it's helpful. I feel like once I learned to use those things got so much easier.

If you can post an example that would be great, I'd be keen for any guides to help me improve. Haven't had much time to look at any of this for a loooong time because work has been so hectic. I am attempting my first MAGS entry though, so see how that goes
#3
Critics' Lounge / Re: Help for a newbie
Wed 28/10/2015 01:34:54
Quote from: Gatata03 on Tue 27/10/2015 20:07:31
Good start! ;) it looks good but very empty and clean, you didn't say if the room is supposed to be scary or clean or whatever but when i looked at the room the first thing that i was thinking about was murder and blood (yea i know crazy) so i edited the room a little bit to make it more interesting and scary [imgzoom]http://s9.postimg.org/jrn3d732n/e_TMYaiv.png[/imgzoom]
I also made the fridge little bigger ( i hope its not too big now :-D)
and i know that the blood looks kinda weird but i tried my best :c

That looks awesome! Pity it's not a murder scene :) -  I like the vent you've out in though and the Fridge looks much better bigger. Tiles look really good as well. Do you mind I use them as a reference for improving the scene?
#4
Critics' Lounge / Re: Help for a newbie
Wed 07/10/2015 01:19:06
Thanks for the feedback, I agree the fridge is too small and the corridor too wide. Really appreciate it everyone :)
#5
Critics' Lounge / Help for a newbie
Tue 06/10/2015 15:20:25
Ok so I'm very new to this and like most people with a background more based in programming graphics scare me. I've been working on my first ever background for my first ever game and wanted to see if I could get some feedback. This is the first scene, inside a space station (police station), there is an exit to the left and right and a door to the captains cabin. There's an old fridge, full of nothing but old uneaten lunches and the room (like most of the station) is lit by green lights all over the wall.

Bearing in mind I'm not going to have the skills to enhance too much, can anyone give me some advice to step it up a notch>

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