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If you already have access to bloom effects, I'd use it. So: 1st one. Otherwise: The house could use more asymmetry, that one bush doesn't quite cut it. Some suggestions:
-Allow the lower part of the windows to curve naturally with the round house
-Do the same with the staircase as well, and add perspective by changing the length of the planks (top(farthest) shortest, lower (closest) longest).

I do prefer the pixel version though

-Thanks, will fix legs.
-Yeah the head profile needs some fixing. Will have to experiment to see what works best.
-Those are just the ends of the gloves, hands haven't been included yet

Thanks so much for the feedback, seems like I'm heading in the right direction, since he's supposed to look extremely naive (cute, cuddly I guess)

FOR FELLOW ARTISTS

1st game, 1st post (apart from the introduction).
Before I do colors, walk-cycle, and animations. Just requesting constructive criticism for the main character:
-Super naive and oblivious, extremely "simple minded", wanna-be adventurer
-Spoof on Fantasy game genre, hence spoof of a typical adventurer

-Will be a "Calvin & Hobbes" newspaper hat
-Line-art will be colored
-Proportions: 1:3 heads, (Mickey Mouse style)

Personally:
-Need to fix the legs so the bend and length is equal
-Need to fix scarf in side-view
-3/4 back view makes his neck look like he has a tumor, will see after colors, if it still stands out, would remove horizontal neck line

Hiya everyone,
Just wanted to introduce myself, looking forward to becoming part of the community

-Bangkok, Thailand
-Retired Professional Artist/ Hobby animator
-First video game:
Link: The Legend of Zelda (on NES)
-First adventure game:
Day of The Tentacle/Monkey Island
-Favorite game:
Telltale's Batman Series (I love Batman! I love most Telltale games)
-Favorite adventure game:
Emerald City Confidential (I love all Wadjet Eye Games)

I retired a while back and decided to make my own adventure game given my extra free time. I joined because I'm using AGS (duh!) and will probably have questions as I progress.

I love adventure games... or to be more specific: I love what I call "Interactive Fiction". I don't mind the puzzles and so on, but most of all, I like the stories and Worlds created. That's why I love recent Telltale games (as they have low to no difficulty (plus I'm a huge Batman fan...) which focus more on story telling), and Wadjet Eye Games (because they feature excellent stories and a well thought out World).

Thanks and keep up the good work: some of the best adventure games I've played are ones people have hardly heard of.