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Thank you to all that replied I will keep all of your critism in mind when I remodel her.

The eyes kind of bug me since she generally has an anime/manga style. They're just too small to fit that style.
If you don't want an anime/manga style, then make her chin a little less pointy.
And her hair looks and hangs like wet egg noodles. I suggest at least giving a bit more life to it or changing the shape or something.

Haha, okay I'm not really sure what I'm going for I've tired doing anime before but I'm terrible at it. I'll make her chin smaller and I'll redo the hair. These comments are very helpful thank you

Thank you to those that repl

Now that the arms have been brought up, I'm also noticing how triangular her clothing is.
The longer I look at the top image, the more alien and unnatural she feels. I think it's the uncanny valley. She's close to looking like anime style, but there are enough subtle differences to make my mind scream.
I also want to say that her breasts are a little too low for their size, but I can't be sure at this point. I just know that they feel off to me

Thank you for reply, I'll remodel her and do more studying  right away.

Hello,

I've been lurking around for a while  I made this 3d model, 100 percent mines. Clothes hair body etc, made in Blender. And decided to do cel shading since I can't paint worth poop and I'm not the best at creating skin textures from photos either. Inspired by Marius Oberholster, his videos are very helpful.

Anyway I was wondering what you guys think? She's not rigged yet, and I'll be adding animations later making a basic walk cycle. Thanks for taking time out your day to reply to a nobody like me...I appreciate any opinions or what I can improve.



Here a topology picture too.