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Thanks for your feedback...
I've listened to your suggestions and this is what I've come up with:



Let me know what you think


Thanks

Hello,

This is the Imperial Flag for a sci-fi type country/world.

Please tell me what you think.

* Aesthetically - good/bad? Geometry, proportions, colors, etc.
* What does this flag communicate to you? (i.e. emotions like fear or happyness, concepts like power or diplomacy)
* How can it be improved?
* Is the flag suitable for the type of setting I want to use it in?
* Any other feedback

Thanks!

Hi.
Any assistance/feedback with attempt #2 still greatly desired.
btw the numbers marked in attempt #2 are relative to the height of the head. so for example 2/3 means 2/3 of the height of the head.

Thanks,

cReative

(Sorry for the double post, but its almost been 1 month).

My suggestion: The clouds should not be a jagged transition from blue to white

There is too much variation in whiteness to greyness in the clouds.

Here is some feedback

The background was too flat for me
This is along the lines of my suggested changes:

Thanks for your comments, everyone.
This is attempt #2. Please give constructive feedback and paintovers as before.



Notes:

- Mirrored left side hair to right, still not sure if I like the results, I cant draw hair very well.
- Added bang to hair, not sure if I like the effect.
- Made face shape less "blunt" (?)
- Proportions have been altered and are marked
- Changed proportion of neck, shoulders, arms, hand, breasts, waist, positioning of breast area.
- Total height is 7 heads.
- Added feet (not sure if I like the result)
- Still don't know how/what to do with other arm.
- Something is still not right with the breasts

Further assistance is appreciated.

Thanks.

Its funny in a way... and creative... but...

I don't like teh bamboo wallpaper.
Its too bright and otherwise the pattern is abrasive to the eyes.

Otherwise, good job.

This is meant to be constructive feedback.

1. Its too bright (and cheery?) for a graveyard
2. The greens look flat
3. More detail in the tree branches and leaves.
4. The archway is too small vertically (for example relative to the size fo the door on the building)
5.  The arm looks like its just laying there.
6. The side of the Sierra grave marker looks off.
7. Inconsistent shadows (the two graves on the right have well-defined shadows while other objects do not).

Hi,

I can't draw women. I've tried many times and it always ends up looking messed up.
This is not my first attempt.
Constructive feedback and paintovers/edits would be greatly appreciated.


Notes (these are just some notes, please dont limit your constructive feedback to these points):
1. I don't know how to draw hair. I was just messing around and got something that I sort of like (sort of).
2. Face - as you can tell by the rest of the picture, its kinda on the downlow when it comes to details. Whenever I do faces they always suck.
3. I dont know what I'm doing with the arms either. Especially the girl's right arm (your left). I kind tried to make it look like its going behind her back but again thats why its not detailed.
4. Hips - I know they are asymmetrical... That was my attempt to show the pose she is standing in
5. Feet - I dont know what to do hear either. I was trying to make show her feet with toes pointing towards the camera.
6. I made this in MS Paint and edited it slightly using another program. But I dont think its worth it to use another program until I get the basics down correct.
7. I don't know how to do the coloring or shading either. Ive tried before to take a pen and paper drawing and scan it and try to color using a graphics program, but it always looks messed up.

Thanks in advance and looking forward to constructive feedback.

- cReative