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#2
amazing!! :o

pity it's high res, because otherwise it's a winner!!
#3
Critics' Lounge / Re: Igor character C&C
Mon 20/07/2009 19:08:55
reminds me of Ben stiller in Tropic thunder...when he wen't full retard.
#4
played the new version on pc. Won it in 2 hours aprox...

Prefer the original. Hate the new voice overs.

I don't know....I love the pixel!  := ;D
#5
hey! that's a nice paintover!

I wanted it to have flat colors, that's why I didn't shade it before.

Love the hand! That's a keeper.

The thing about the stripes is ok, I should change that...

The boxers I prefer the originals.

thanks!
#6
I would change the layout.  make the table smaller.

But I think the composition is the main problem here.
#7
Thanks for the crits!

I'm not making a game right now, I'm just drawing some sprites to get back into shape. But will be making a short game really soon I think! :=
#8
thanks for the crit!

I thought of making him like you say, but he is not that old. He has some kind of military background; thats the reason for his good posture, but also for his bad hip.
#9
Hey!

I made this new character today! Some lines to get you in the mood... ;D

Every single day Mr. Brown wears the same outfit: His favorite Waldo T-shirt, a pair of white socks, a pair of blue slippers and absolutely zero pants. 
A faulty hip forces him to rely on his old, hand made, wooden cane, but that won't stop him from walking around.
He won't treat you nicely, after all, he is just a grumpy old man, but the things he can tell you, the experiences he went through...well, they are worth it.




I'd really love to get some feedback





Thanks!! :=
#10
yeah! something like that!

I draw this background just now to show you what I mean. 15 minutes and in paint so it's pretty bad, but it'll work.





Maybe drawing the light shaft is a good idea...depends on the scene
#11
Just a tiny alien tadpole :=



from a veeeeery far away planet ;D
#12
Hi! It's looking good!

Here are some crits:

-The hard dark edges kill the mood. Try using a shade of the object color for the edge or even better, get rid of them and try to create the shape using shades.
-The window looks like a poster, too flat. Remember those buildings are quite far away! You might want to wash the colors out a bit.
- There is no visible light going through the window. I'm not saying to draw the shaft of light, but to, for example, make a brighter the place where the light is hitting.
- The room seems to be out of scale. The table looks too big, and the ceiling too low.
- The bookshelves look 3d. Did you use sketchup or something?

The rest looks good!
Keep it up!



#13
Critics' Lounge / Faty Character crit
Thu 16/07/2009 03:17:52
Hi! I draw this character today...

I haven't drawn anything for a very long time now so I need some beloved criticism to improve my style  ;D

It's a basic fat man. I was going for that "skinny legs, big arms, giant belly" look





Not counting color...but it might have 12? I dunno... ???

*EDIT

New version with different arm position




C&C!!
Bye
#14
Quote from: Ghost on Wed 15/07/2009 20:04:13
Sweet theme... time for Spider-Max!



(7colours- Max wouldn't don the red/blue outfit. He *likes* the dark side...)

Perfect!!! :o
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