The font is effective and the colours ork well, but I think you should choose a title that's easier to spell and doesn't have the Hitchcockian connotations.
There's couple of things you might want to think about with regard to that plot.
Firstly, is it believeable that a man could forget he worked for an agency while still remembering everything during his time with them?
Also, at no point during this gameshould the MIB threaten the lead character's life, because if they are prepared to kill him they wouldn't bother convincing him he was crazy.
Finally, your vision of the MIB seems to relate to the Will Smith film rather than the urban legend / conspiracy theory (in with the MIB were usually not human). Perhaps it would be worth inventing your own agency based on the MIB.
-Ali.
There's couple of things you might want to think about with regard to that plot.
Firstly, is it believeable that a man could forget he worked for an agency while still remembering everything during his time with them?
Also, at no point during this gameshould the MIB threaten the lead character's life, because if they are prepared to kill him they wouldn't bother convincing him he was crazy.
Finally, your vision of the MIB seems to relate to the Will Smith film rather than the urban legend / conspiracy theory (in with the MIB were usually not human). Perhaps it would be worth inventing your own agency based on the MIB.
-Ali.