Interestingly, I much prefered the first version, with the "whacky" perspective. The new version looks stiff in comparison.
I think if you worked on the first naïvistic version and polished it a bit, it would turn out better in the end. You could even increase the whackiness of the perspective.
I think if you worked on the first naïvistic version and polished it a bit, it would turn out better in the end. You could even increase the whackiness of the perspective.