Yep, too blurry.
Also, I tend to say this ten times a day, but...colour perspective.
The original background is contrasted, dark and sharp in the foreground, while it blends with the atmosphere in the distance.
Your background has nothing that indicates a depth, in terms of contrast and saturation.
I think you're definitely onto something, and you're improving drastically for every picture. So just keep working
Also, I tend to say this ten times a day, but...colour perspective.
The original background is contrasted, dark and sharp in the foreground, while it blends with the atmosphere in the distance.
Your background has nothing that indicates a depth, in terms of contrast and saturation.
I think you're definitely onto something, and you're improving drastically for every picture. So just keep working
