It's all looking good. The character designs look especially professional.
The background is a good start, however all the barrels actually bother me a bit. Unless this is a barrel manufacturer's house, you could probably do with perhaps only a couple, or at least vary their design a bit. It's never good to have the same shape/pattern recur all over the picture. Especially the pyramid on the left hand side is distracting - in fact, the very act of piling barrels like that seems rather risky.
The mat is not drawn properly - there's a second view point far out on the left side that you need to keep in mind.
I look forward to the coloured version!
The background is a good start, however all the barrels actually bother me a bit. Unless this is a barrel manufacturer's house, you could probably do with perhaps only a couple, or at least vary their design a bit. It's never good to have the same shape/pattern recur all over the picture. Especially the pyramid on the left hand side is distracting - in fact, the very act of piling barrels like that seems rather risky.
The mat is not drawn properly - there's a second view point far out on the left side that you need to keep in mind.
I look forward to the coloured version!