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Thanks a lot guys for all the input. I really appreciate it. I think this pic is going to be very close to final as it is close to the style I was shooting for originally and I can actually reproduce it fairly consistently.



Again, I really appreciate all the advice. I will definitely keep it in mind and use it as I get better.

One idea for the tiled wall would be to make an add out of the blocks. Pick one color block to be the background color, and the other to make a picture out of the squares. Leave it tiled though. If you're into animated backgrounds, makes it change as the sccene scrolls down.

Overall, I like this background, although it does seem a little off kilter toward the bottom (the vanishing point). Blade Runner-y

For some reason only two things really jumped out at me. The eyes do need to be closer, and the bottom of the energy ball would probably look a little better if it were more out of line with the bottom contour of the glove. For some reason it just seems to throw it out of whack for me.

But really excellent drawing nonetheless. You're drawings have a real Shadowrun feel to them. I love Shadowrun

Alrighty. put the new one up under the second, removed the first. I like this much better. And, even if it looks like crap that's gotta be the most FUN I've had doing this in a while.

Wow. I go to work for a day and you guys go wild. 

Nice, Darth. That's a bit closer to what I was going for, I'll try to post another up in the morning. (it's 10 pm here)
I really appreciate all the feedback. You guys rock.

Much better use of space, I think. It looks like a small music shop now. They're always slightly crowded. I love small shops.

I especially like the shopping bags, for some reason. They just make me happy.

Only thing I would say is maybe (a big maybe) put a poster or flier on the left wall...?
Looks fine without it, but it wouldn't look bad with it either

Took out a lot of the background noise in the star field.
The system star is actually somewhat passable now
The stars have a bit of color to them now, and the planet is closer to being the desolate, uninhabitable wasteland it should be

Great responses, btw. Any more out there, throw them in.

This will essentially be one of a couple of splashes used in the opening sequence. The star sucks, I know that, but the rest I'm mostly happy with. Any ideas?