Wow thank you for suck detailed feedback. This is my progress so far with the lineart. I saw that you'd made the face a bit bigger and rounder so I ran with that and made it even chunkier, ( matching my normal lineart style). Since it's generally a bit bigger anyway I took your leads and added some more detail and gave him a Chinese style top.

His arms are supposed to be swinging forward to balance out his feet but it looks off so I will probably redraw those.
The recolours have given me a lot to think about too and once I have ironed out the bugs with this I'll give him a colouring in.

His arms are supposed to be swinging forward to balance out his feet but it looks off so I will probably redraw those.
The recolours have given me a lot to think about too and once I have ironed out the bugs with this I'll give him a colouring in.