Sounds okay, but there's a few things that bug me.
Alot of the "melody" notes just seem, out of place with the beat. Like, not on the ands, and different sub divisions, but just, weird.
I do like the drums and bass though, those are very neat. I would suggest, being a avid jazz musician, to write a head (Melody, main part of the song). One that could be repeated a few times by all, or a few of the instruments, and then have solos. Then eventually, at the end, play the head at the end.
Take this Jazz midi I composed for example:
http://www.ssonicnet.com/lobt/schoolwork.mid
It's not done, but it does have the head. It's a 12 bar blues, in Bb. The first 12 bars are just rythm section (Drums, piano, bass). Then the Saxophone kicks in to play the melody of the song. It's repeated again, with the addition of a baritone saxophone playing a counter melody bass line thing.
If I ever finished this song, the next part would be a solo, probably 3 or 4 12 bar sections together. Then the head would play again, and have an ending that finishes the song.
Your midi is a great start, and as excellent atmosphere, and would work well in the above mentioned locations. A little more polish, and it could really make the particular scene it's featured in stick out.
Alot of the "melody" notes just seem, out of place with the beat. Like, not on the ands, and different sub divisions, but just, weird.
I do like the drums and bass though, those are very neat. I would suggest, being a avid jazz musician, to write a head (Melody, main part of the song). One that could be repeated a few times by all, or a few of the instruments, and then have solos. Then eventually, at the end, play the head at the end.
Take this Jazz midi I composed for example:
http://www.ssonicnet.com/lobt/schoolwork.mid
It's not done, but it does have the head. It's a 12 bar blues, in Bb. The first 12 bars are just rythm section (Drums, piano, bass). Then the Saxophone kicks in to play the melody of the song. It's repeated again, with the addition of a baritone saxophone playing a counter melody bass line thing.
If I ever finished this song, the next part would be a solo, probably 3 or 4 12 bar sections together. Then the head would play again, and have an ending that finishes the song.
Your midi is a great start, and as excellent atmosphere, and would work well in the above mentioned locations. A little more polish, and it could really make the particular scene it's featured in stick out.