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Yeah it is big, i noticed that, but i am finishing this.

ps if you want to know why i didn't finish this before, its because we were moving and i have not had acess to the internet but just now

how big is this?

because where i live you have to pay for each mb you dl
anyway, how big is this?

EDIT thanks Kingsized

EDIT-EDIT: if you wan't to know how much i pay for megabyte, its about 28 mb for a dollar

i agree what Demorgon tm said, it's really dark

I live in Island and there has been svereal volcanos eruption and i was in a middle of city were an earthquake came, i think it was about 7.4 richtscale
well anyway for those who don't know how its like, here is a satelite photo:

there have been many volcanos on this area and many earthquakes here is a pickture of iceland, and the dots are earthquakes:

and as you can see, there have been many earthquakes for the last 24 hours, but still its fun to be here

well, will i get an award?


fixed the perspective on everything exept the small table and the blackboard
i made it all go to one pixel 1 x 1 not 2 x 2

ok, i changed the perspective on the hallway and decided it to be like this, note, this is just halffinished, i am working on it as fast as i can but until then, please tell me what you think
here it is:

note, the white part is for the GUI

man that's hard

ok ok I'm sorry i just forgot how hard i am to everyone so sorry

now back to the pickture

*add another foot on the chair, and also fix the perspective on the back of the chair

ill work on it, i am changing the hallway, but the room is going to be like this

you hava half finished the room, don't post it if you KNOW it sucks, add some detail and then post it, else you will get a BIG list

i made the the window dark dark dark grey and added the window, and changed it into 16bit, to show you what you should do because you made the window BEHIND the products, i also tried making the shop from outside but you should add a sign over the right shop, saying "costumes and co"

i saw some thing wrong in the picture, (i may be hard on you or though but that's just me)

*there is no rough on the street fix that
*i thought that electricity was underground, but if it is over, then put it on a rod, fix that
*there is NOTHING inside the shop, fix that (couple of suggestion)
    *more products because sellers always put they'r best products in the window
    *a counter
*There are no prizes on the costumes fix that
*i also saw a BIB proplem and i am going to let the pickture show: FIX  this
*there is nothing in the sky, fix that (couples of suggestion)
    *birds
    *clouds
    *sun
*there is nothing in the alley, fix that (couple of suggestion)
    *sorp can
    *sorp here and there like old news papers, bananas and so on
*the shading in the news paper stand is wrong, fix that
*there are no windows on the skyscraper, fix that
*there is something wrong with the blank, behind the fence, see what i mean:, the red line is the street, from the right but it goes over 2 blank spaces which show the skyscraper, fix the blank spaces on the fence
*the position of the news paper stand is wrong, you have to be on the street to get the paper, fix that

i have the idea i forgot something, aniway i have a question:

*what is this black line in the alley? the one on the building to the left

i made the hallway:


i made the spaces between the rooms the size as the room is
made a button to turn On /Off the lights
i also used the same wall and floor from the room

i also changed some detail in my room, check it out:


i need some help with the roof metal in hallway because of the length, when roof is finished, i will use the same for the floor.

my point
take out from top row(from left up right)1, 2, 3, 5 and 6
from second row, take out: 4, 5, 6
and please, remove they're horrible smile, i get nightmares (don't take it as an insult)

ok, tried a few of your suggestions *quoted below, with comments*:

http://jupiter.walagata.com/w/skurai/4try.bmp

http://jupiter.walagata.com/w/skurai/4tryb.bmp

1*fix her left view, it looks like leftup view
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  -----> not quite sure what you mean by this, could you clarify it for me?

2*her shoes in view 2 has same shoes as view 1, fix that and fix her shoes in view 3 and 4
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  -----> Tried fixing her shoes in view 2 *dunno if it's 'fixed' or not ^^;;* also, could you point out whats wrong with the shoes in view 3 and 4?

3*also in view 3 you are not suposed to see her face, fix that
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  ------> did it, but i think it was better before lol *actually, i had it so you coulden't see her face at all at first, then my girlfreind suggested i make it so you could see some of her face in view 3, oh well, let me know what you think.*

4*also fix the color between her legs in view 1 and 2, it's really disturbing
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  ----> wow, i diden't noticed that.... it is kind of desturbing, but fixed now 

also, fun with colors!:

http://jupiter.walagata.com/w/skurai/4pcsdiffcol.bmp

1 well instead of looking left, she is looking at this direction[img]http://www.geocities.com/jnatann/Images/arrowupleft.png[img]

2 make them even, you know, not like she is standing on her toes, make it:
_____ instead of
__----

3 well, if you see her in view 3, then you have to fix her hair in all the other 3 views

4 i can still see it, make it like hotspot did, some space between her legs, it's like looking up on girls dress *caugh* *caugh*

add some cubs on the table, also many thins are either smaller or bigger than the caracter, also either the room is BIG or everything is small work on that

*her hands do have some muscles in left(normal, up and down) and right(normal, up and down) fix that
*when you see her leftup, up and rightup, the bag suddenly changes, i may be wrong but fix that(may be because of the shading)
*when she looks left(up and down) and right(up and down) she raises her shoulders, fix that
*left, up and right, her hairs gets really shine, fix that

also please but more time between the view so i can get a better look

normal 2x 4x


humm

*fix her left view, it looks like leftup view
*her shoes in view 2 has same shoes as view 1, fix that and fix her shoes in view 3 and 4
*also in view 3 you are not suposed to see her face, fix that
*also fix the color between her legs in view 1 and 2, it's really disturbing

what program did you use, and where can i get it?

 my point, (i may be rude or tough or hard on you)

*there is somehing about her hand that i don't like, work on that

I like the idea and maybe i could help on the backgrounds, that is if you wan't, i can also give some tips (i think )
but please show some screene, even if it's just space, anything