The premise doesn't sound bad, if you handle the story well. I like the screenie, too. Good luck with the game.
My only suggestion would be to rename the character "The One". Sounds a little TOO Matrix-y which is weird, cause the overal plot is very Matrix-y. Perhaps you should call him something like The Creator, or The Man.
Heh. Good luck, sir!
Bt
My only suggestion would be to rename the character "The One". Sounds a little TOO Matrix-y which is weird, cause the overal plot is very Matrix-y. Perhaps you should call him something like The Creator, or The Man.
Heh. Good luck, sir!
Bt