Alright! I haves the truth in my mouth. Brilliant.
Don't thank me yet, though. Reputation is still a big part of getting people to work with you, and the anime sort of style you use might not be what a lot of people are looking for (it seems like most people either love that style or hate it, but if you look at most of the games produced here, you'll see that they tend to shoot for either a more realistic style or one based more in the western cartoon tradition, so it may be safe to infer that that is what most people are looking for.) But you can still draw, which is more than a lot of coder/writer types can say for themselves, and there may be some anime lovers lurking in the shadows.
The best advice you can take is to follow advice. There's a good bit of it in this thread, and some of it isn't worded very nicely, but a lot it is still probably worth taking. I see grammar come up a lot. I think your grammar has improved even over the course of this thread. That's a good thing.
I can sympathize with this one, because when I first started on the internet, I didn't know where to put a period. One of the first places I posted was on a role playing forum. After a couple of (really, really terrible) posts in my first game there, the guy running it got (understandably) frustrated with and said "you can keep playing with us, but for God's sake, use periods." I wasn't very confident that I knew the right place for a period at the time, but I used them anyway, and tried to imitate the better writers as well as I could, and after a year of role playing there, one of my teachers told me I was one of the best writers in my high school. (Mileage may very. And it was a small school that only went up to grade ten, so the accomplishment isn't THAT huge, but the point is, keep at it and you'll get better.)
You seem to have periods down okay, but keep working on them. I know spelling and punctuation are kind of stupid and pointless, once you've gotten to the point where people know what you are trying to say, but when people who use more or less proper punctuation, etc. read things written by people who don't, we tend to read them slightly differently in our heads. There are a lot of tiny subtleties to pronunciation in English. So for instance the letter "u" doesn't end up sounding the same as the word "you" and the letter "X" sounds slightly different than the combo "ks" so that "that sux" and "that sucks" sound just a little different. It might even be more of an association thing than it is the actual sound, but regardless, when a lot of people read that stuff, it sounds a bit like funny, broken English in their heads, and it can have an unfortunate negative effect on their impressions of the writer. I'm not going to attempt to defend this way of thinking, because it is kind of unfair, not to mention anal, but it still stands that the better your writing is, the more intelligent people will tend to think you are--and the more likely they will be to take you seriously and treat you politely.
I'd say probably the best thing you could do right now is to try to get into the habit of capitalization. I don't know if this is very easy on your phone or not, but it should be possible, and you shouldn't need to do it more than a couple of times per sentence. Just capitalize the first letter of every sentence, any names, and "I" when you use it to refer to yourself. I bet you anything, just that and keeping on with the periods will make people take you a little more seriously. Because it happens at the beginning of a sentence, it is also the first thing people will see when they read your posts, so in a way you could say that even iffy capitalization will literally give you a good first impression. So seriously, just pay attention to this paragraph and ignore everything else that I say.
Apologies if you have learned more grammar than your posts show and it seems like I am talking down to you. That is not my intent. I figure sometimes it just helps to hear the same stuff a few times until it clicks.
Regarding RPGs: I've been working on an RPG battle system for a while now, with the up to date versions of AGS. It isn't very cleanly coded, and if I ever get around to using it, I would rather keep it unique, so I won't share it with you. However, I would be happy to help you work through some of the concepts involved if you drop me a PM. Explaining what I have done would help me wrap my mind around what I am doing better, anyway, so it could be a mutually beneficial transaction, and it wouldn't clutter the board so much.
I won't be able to discuss it a lot for the next couple of weeks, since I've got some projects due and Finals coming up. After that I will be relatively free, however.
Don't thank me yet, though. Reputation is still a big part of getting people to work with you, and the anime sort of style you use might not be what a lot of people are looking for (it seems like most people either love that style or hate it, but if you look at most of the games produced here, you'll see that they tend to shoot for either a more realistic style or one based more in the western cartoon tradition, so it may be safe to infer that that is what most people are looking for.) But you can still draw, which is more than a lot of coder/writer types can say for themselves, and there may be some anime lovers lurking in the shadows.
The best advice you can take is to follow advice. There's a good bit of it in this thread, and some of it isn't worded very nicely, but a lot it is still probably worth taking. I see grammar come up a lot. I think your grammar has improved even over the course of this thread. That's a good thing.
I can sympathize with this one, because when I first started on the internet, I didn't know where to put a period. One of the first places I posted was on a role playing forum. After a couple of (really, really terrible) posts in my first game there, the guy running it got (understandably) frustrated with and said "you can keep playing with us, but for God's sake, use periods." I wasn't very confident that I knew the right place for a period at the time, but I used them anyway, and tried to imitate the better writers as well as I could, and after a year of role playing there, one of my teachers told me I was one of the best writers in my high school. (Mileage may very. And it was a small school that only went up to grade ten, so the accomplishment isn't THAT huge, but the point is, keep at it and you'll get better.)
You seem to have periods down okay, but keep working on them. I know spelling and punctuation are kind of stupid and pointless, once you've gotten to the point where people know what you are trying to say, but when people who use more or less proper punctuation, etc. read things written by people who don't, we tend to read them slightly differently in our heads. There are a lot of tiny subtleties to pronunciation in English. So for instance the letter "u" doesn't end up sounding the same as the word "you" and the letter "X" sounds slightly different than the combo "ks" so that "that sux" and "that sucks" sound just a little different. It might even be more of an association thing than it is the actual sound, but regardless, when a lot of people read that stuff, it sounds a bit like funny, broken English in their heads, and it can have an unfortunate negative effect on their impressions of the writer. I'm not going to attempt to defend this way of thinking, because it is kind of unfair, not to mention anal, but it still stands that the better your writing is, the more intelligent people will tend to think you are--and the more likely they will be to take you seriously and treat you politely.
I'd say probably the best thing you could do right now is to try to get into the habit of capitalization. I don't know if this is very easy on your phone or not, but it should be possible, and you shouldn't need to do it more than a couple of times per sentence. Just capitalize the first letter of every sentence, any names, and "I" when you use it to refer to yourself. I bet you anything, just that and keeping on with the periods will make people take you a little more seriously. Because it happens at the beginning of a sentence, it is also the first thing people will see when they read your posts, so in a way you could say that even iffy capitalization will literally give you a good first impression. So seriously, just pay attention to this paragraph and ignore everything else that I say.
Apologies if you have learned more grammar than your posts show and it seems like I am talking down to you. That is not my intent. I figure sometimes it just helps to hear the same stuff a few times until it clicks.
Regarding RPGs: I've been working on an RPG battle system for a while now, with the up to date versions of AGS. It isn't very cleanly coded, and if I ever get around to using it, I would rather keep it unique, so I won't share it with you. However, I would be happy to help you work through some of the concepts involved if you drop me a PM. Explaining what I have done would help me wrap my mind around what I am doing better, anyway, so it could be a mutually beneficial transaction, and it wouldn't clutter the board so much.
I won't be able to discuss it a lot for the next couple of weeks, since I've got some projects due and Finals coming up. After that I will be relatively free, however.