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you could add some shading like progzmax always does.

I think it's really nice. Only the green stuff makes it look like it isn't in a city wich I expect such a shop to be.
Also the pavement looks a bit empty maybe add some signs to fill it up (ex. traffic sign, busstop sign)

keep up the good work. 

very funny and the Nightwish music I had playing on the back fitted well hehehe

ok ok ill give it a quick try 

hey it's freddie kruéger!!  no no just kidding. IMO only his ear looks wrong , the rest looks fine 

Freddie's handshoe with knifes as fingers.  or is there anightmare on elmstreet game already?? 

It's l33t ducky but it's no critic lounge so why bother ??

the logo thingy is point out a bit too far.

yeah i guess that person who came up with: "practice makes perfect" was right.

I think the white for is better coz that way you'll have a better contras with the reporsoir. 

it looks a bit like he has a spot above his chin. Unless he suppose to have it , it looks weird

I think I'm gonna re draw it using 3d programs and maybe a vanishing point. Thanks for all the help full comments people 

I'm not the best artist but I think it's very good. Why change anything at all?? It's already good this way. Only one small thing: the borders on the roof are showed from both sides, that cant be right. Oh and btw that room behind the characters looks pretty narrow. I dunno if you ment it that way.

I just want to know if I'm going the right way with this before I'll add more detail.

No.

I'm still stuck with the perspective, I don't get how yo all do it with that vanishing point and stuff.

Have you ever heard of, for example, Google?

Anyway tell me what you think of it , please.

It isn't done yet.

I think that perspective is pretty good.

Not exactly. I'd even say there's NO perspective.

ok so what am I doing wrong then??

Google is my friend but all i seem to get is a band site and useless stuff when i fill in "vanishing point"

yes I said it isnt done yet.

of course there is a little perspective but I'm bad at it. Saying it's all useless and lack of prespective wont help me.

it seems to have a different style then the rest of the BG

erm i'm not sure who it is. Is it flinch or what's his name??
Without knowing who he is here is some C&C:

- the style of this char is very different from the others.

- his legs looks weird, even thought he's leaning.

Try using a vanishing point, you'll have to bring the side wall up from under too.

sure but how do I use a vanishing point?? I never found a tutorial about it. I'll try to make the floor some straight when I have time.

Thnx for the nice comments  and if you thinking of posting in the future: thnx in advance

it looks really good. Only the wood of the house looks kinda weird. I dunno, maybe change that.

This suppose to be a spooky room inside a haunted house. It isn't done yet but I just want to know if I'm going the right way with this before I'll add more detail. I'm still stuck with the perspective, I don't get how yo all do it with that vanishing point and stuff. Anyway tell me what you think of it , plz. 

I dont know about perspective but I think it looks fine