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#1
Critics' Lounge / Re: Background Sketches
Wed 13/07/2011 18:00:28


Woah! That's awesome! :O Thumbs up! Love the bridge! And the hut seems simple but at the same time it is like "woah! I should open that door and see what's inside!" also it guess it would be even more like "woah!I should open that door and see what's inside!" if you put a glowing little window or something. I don't know how to say it... But as ProgZmax said, you should really finish that.


Edit by ProgZ: Please don't quote images, particularly on the same page as your post.
#2
Critics' Lounge / Re: Background Sketches
Tue 12/07/2011 17:23:50
Quote from: Ryan Timothy on Tue 12/07/2011 01:37:51
You don't mean for the 'camera' to be on that much of an angle did you? It's not so bad with the bridge, but the house is really too much on both images. Or is that just because the sketch hasn't been rotated?

When I make a sketch I don'r really care about the angle, I can always rotate it in the final version, also I can add more details. But thanks.
#3
Critics' Lounge / Re: Background Sketches
Mon 11/07/2011 18:23:00
You are right... I totally forgot about scaling :S well... These are the 4° version of the hut and the inn/bar (it is both... also there'll be a little conversation with the owner of that place about wheter it is an inn or a bar (there's a sign telling you that it is an inn and there's also this huge sign that points that it is a bar))



I would listen to some more suggestions before starting the colored versions of the backgrounds.
NickyNyce, anian thanks.
#4
Critics' Lounge / Re: Background Sketches
Mon 11/07/2011 05:55:01
Quote from: NickyNyce on Mon 11/07/2011 02:02:53
I like the bottom one with the tiki torches and skulls, but you might want to raise the perspective a bit, and if the bottom picture contains the bar?  I would go with the middle one.

And if your looking for some crazy ideas....how about some bamboo crosses, some bone jewelery hanging around, maybe a snake lying around or in a tree.

Hehe thanks for the suggestions. I really like the bamboo crosses idea. The first three pictures are from the hut and the other three are from the bar/inn. Personally, I prefer the skulls from the third picture using the hut of the second... And with the bar/inn the second one.
#5
Critics' Lounge / Background Sketches
Mon 11/07/2011 01:05:27
Which version of this hut should I use? What should I improve?



It is supposed to be the house of a voodoo lady-like character.

Also, there is going to be a inn-bar in the swamp of Horrore Island (the island where the previous hut is).




Thanks.
#6
I guess I should introduce myself first. I'm Hector, also I'm from Mexico (I know that might not be used as an excuse, but that's the reason behind my bad english).

I'm working on this game (Gustave & Rosquillas). I began the project three weeks ago.

What about the story?:
Gustave is a kid raised in a circus. The kind of evil circus that cause a kid to flee from it at the age of 10. Gustave join to Captain Morgan's crew. Gustave found a father in Captain Morgan. However, Walt Blades an old enemy of Morgan attacked the ship. Gustave tried to defeat Blades but was thrown over board. He somehow managed to survive and at the beggining of the game has to steal Captain Blackmoustache's ship with two members of the crew inside it.

Who is Gustave anyway?
This guy:


Screenshots!


Also I'm looking for a programmer to make some mini-games like ship battles, cannon firing, etc.
I was looking for artist, but finally I decided to made that part on my own. Anyway I'm still accepting artists for the project.
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