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i cant tell if it is broken or not it says it is but how do i know

just wondering if the sea in the background is going to have any kind of boats or anything whizzing across it?
would be a nice little detail and you could even some how make it funny.

great work can't wait to see more

-Daz

PS: loving the pigeon

i like the first one the most and i like the posture it suits him and i think the black out line is good.

im not sure about gradients on the characters and they all lack shading

-Daz

hey id thought id do a quick edit



i basically added a gun and a fanice ammo pockets on him

-daz

ps you have too look quite hard  to see anything:P

i think it looks very nice,

i agree with Russtaccio the bandana does look stiff and im not sure about the beard.

other than that looks great

-Daz

I don't like the way that the italian job was re-raleased and the suposed re-release of the great escape from america and the old war movies ie battle of britain i think it was where they make the american the hero when they were nothing to do with it. but that is just money hungry film companies changing history to sell more, and re-releasing classics and put more action in them to sell more.

-daz

well I'm sorry to pounse on a bit of advertisment :

any way in not sure ill finish it and the stories are probally completely different.
good luck

steal my idea why don't ya' i was gunna do a wester game and now if i post my characters im gunna look like an idiot (or even more so). nah just kinding with you even though i did have a western game in mind and i am in the planning and drawing bit but hey.

i think the mountain path looks as if it is floating and the building lacks depth maybe draw something going on inside, o yeh the door looks as if it is going into the mountain it kinda needs to look like it is going back and it will look more of an outhouse (if that is what it is?) and give the mountains some shading too, i think that will do it

-Daz

yeh i can't get over the car for some reason
the perspctive and praportion are perfect

and same as everyone esle i think it fits really

good work can't wait to see finshed version

I like the pose, but i can't make out what he is holding im guessing it is a gun of some sort and not sure what the background is but hey..

maybe add some more detail and facial features,

and where is he looking?

i think he has given up on it

shame really would have been nice to play

-Daz

hey, sweet walk cycle

i agree with dart, add a bit of bouce and it will be there
i tried a walk cycle and it didn't turn out to great 

keep it up

-daz

it looks really cool

i love the full tournament gear its great
maybe get rid of the little crosses and make it one big one on the flag on its back, thats it really

-Daz

sorry about that didn't cross my mind at the time

any way thanks heres the finished (unanimated at the moment) bg just so you can see it,

and i made sure it was GIF



cheers

-Daz

hey yeh those are great ideas

cheers

-Daz

i just got paint shop pro 8 off of OSC and i tried it out and came up with this, it another one of the bgs being used in my possible game.



it looks empty and needs something, please could i get a little help?

cheers

-Daz

it looks great and a good idea.

to make it more cartoonish maybe up the contrast and make the lighting a bit less dramatic, thats all i can think of right now.

hope it helps.

-Daz

i think the bottom of Remco Bogaard's edit should have a lighter bottom maybe even translucent a bit like stuh's edit.

the fire keeps getting more and more realistic, i think stuh's one looks like a large scale forest fire, the way it is spread out not and looks amazingly cool.

you might want to look at opo tersers edit on his first edit  http://www.agsforums.com/yabb/index.php?topic=13520.0 its a bit down from the top

-Daz

i think its looks cool, kind of a front on view of gta

only thing i can think of is if you put a stair way going up the side of the taller building maybe even a smashed up car outside of it.

other wise looks cool.

-Daz

it seems a bit level, maybe adjust hight even more and make it more up and down

and put more flares on it as well

i like that edit, its a good technique to use for fire, saddly i still haven't got psp off OSC yet so i cannot do that

-daz