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right i realise my edit is not as good as it could be if i used opo's edit so i used and it turned out like this



i tried to reduce the sinister look and clump the pixles more.

-Daz

computer is now better and i have done this edit it has some of the ideas from opos edit but i have changed the style to more cartoony, don't get me wrong opo's edit was top notch, but not the style im going for.

i suppose thats the idea of the critcs lounge, to adapt and improve.

anyway here it is



c+c??
ta

-Daz

yeh, sorry about not being able to post much but my computer broke and i resorted to posting from school.

i like all the ideas and i love the edit you did Opo, thanks alot.

i will do another edit and post it here asap and see what you think

ta muchly

-Daz

ps hope you don't mind if i use that edit as a bases of my bg in my practise game?

This is the inside of a the house i drew a while back, if you can remember. And once again will most likley be used in a practise game.

so here it is


i need some real help on the colours, but everything else is up to you! ohh and the sofa was drawn in a couple of seconds because thats one of the things i really cannot draw.  

thanks

-Daz

i hate the adverts where they say

"buy this pen and  recieve two other pens for an additional £25 and if you pay by credit card you get another set for free."

and the adverts trying to sell a 200 in 1 colapsable gym

"works your abs, tricepts, quads and finger muscles all at the same time"

-Daz

i've had 955.1 three times now. arrgh!!!

getting close to 1000 with 986.2  

so far i have managed 914.3

but i am still playing and aiming for 1000

this is a must play version of yeti sports, its all happy tree friends and amazing

http://personal.zahav.net.il/personalsite/re/reveali/ht1.html

enjoy

-Daz

Conkers bad fur day!!!!

not many HumVees in the area of England that i live but i managed to see off a Range Rover driver

happy earth day everyone that wants to celebrate!

-daz

wow cheers guys,

great edits, i have taken them plus some help from inkoddi on the colour of the snow and merged them all in to this...


i re-added the black lines in places i thought it was needed and as i said played around with the colours and gave up, so i got inkoddi to do it :

thanks guys who did the editing and the helping, lets give it more perfecting

-Daz

So would you all say it is perfected now? or is there yet more to add.

i just read what OSC said about me having the potential to be a pixel artist, :o WOW thats the last thing i expected to read  :o

thanks everyone for the great comments

-Daz

ps- OSC can i call you by your real name?? lol

seeing as it is night time maybe u could add some  stars and a moon and if not maybe some clouds, to give it more of an atmosphere

-Daz

LOL!!! i used ms paint,

about your rekomendation im not sure wat would be best for you but as u can see ms paint works find for me, but if you are looking for something else then i suggest looking ay the big list of paint programs at the top of critics lounge.

thanks alot.

-Daz

Btw- i'd love to get my hands on psp, all i have is ms paint at the moment  

u have requested it so here it is.



perfect u say, hmmm

ta muchly

-Daz

cheers everyone, i have heeded your advice and have made another edit and has more details including a little pair of wellies.

here it is.


that ok?

thanks again

- Daz

hey thanks for the comments.

here's an edit.



as you can see i buried the shovel and added a tree.

what else could i add, i feel its lacking detail but not sure what?

thanks

i think you could shade the door on the house in the foreground a bit more because it looks like it is flat against the wall.

but it looks 10 times better than the last


- Daz

i think you need to focus on a single point of perspective, the perspective is all over the place on all of the buildings. Especially the barns

other than that looks cool


-Daz

heres my first background attempt. It mite be considered for a game, but its only my first try.  

anyway, here it is



thanks