Just finished it, and I really dug the commentary. It's always fascinating reading the writer's insights into what went into his work, so kudos for that. It's curious to hear the backstory you had planned for Sam - in my mind, the rampant eye swirving thing was a possible to the fact that maybe he was just a guy in a tux operating under the delusion he was a secret agent after an all night bender of espresso and a Roger Moore boxset.
But yeah. Okayish game, awesome commentary. Looks like you've really come a long way as a writer too, if you can pick up on what really didn't work and why.
But yeah. Okayish game, awesome commentary. Looks like you've really come a long way as a writer too, if you can pick up on what really didn't work and why.