ah... now thats something to start with! not bad, much better than ripping monkey island graphics, isn't it..?
I kinda like the thick outlines actually, it adds to your personal style.
Check how "deep" the cupboard goes to the left. Make it shorter.
Then add details, shading and of course something behind that window...
Also check the proportions of your door. It has to be higher and thinner in my opinion... But see for yourself...
Oh and you may consider making that tarpet a little smaller, since there are not many tarpets out there as big as the whole room...
I kinda like the thick outlines actually, it adds to your personal style.
Check how "deep" the cupboard goes to the left. Make it shorter.
Then add details, shading and of course something behind that window...
Also check the proportions of your door. It has to be higher and thinner in my opinion... But see for yourself...
Oh and you may consider making that tarpet a little smaller, since there are not many tarpets out there as big as the whole room...