I agree with Tuomas, the linebreaking is important, and I'm a bit unhappy with the way I did it too - especially that it doesn't break after the comma. But I couldn't make it work otherwise with that font. With a bit of fudging, the ideal linebreaking would probably be:
In a city
so full of life,
it's easy to ignore
the dead.
(I like "the dead" being on a line of it's own, as it's sort of a punchline)
alternately:
In a city
so full of life,
it's easy to
ignore the dead.
For legibility these are probable best. On the other hand, unfinished lines makes you read on, which I think is also the case with the linebreaking in my edit. In addition, this way the less important words ends up at the end of the line, giving the start of the line more impact. (in a city, full of life, easy to ignore, the dead).
In a city
so full of life,
it's easy to ignore
the dead.
(I like "the dead" being on a line of it's own, as it's sort of a punchline)
alternately:
In a city
so full of life,
it's easy to
ignore the dead.
For legibility these are probable best. On the other hand, unfinished lines makes you read on, which I think is also the case with the linebreaking in my edit. In addition, this way the less important words ends up at the end of the line, giving the start of the line more impact. (in a city, full of life, easy to ignore, the dead).