So, - I hate when people start sentences with "so", but anyway- it's been a while since I posted in this thread and I'm always trying to be supportive of horror games... SO I thought I'd have a little suggestion. I just read the synopsis on the first page of the thread and.. I don't think it gives your game justice, really. There's something there, but obviously english is not your first language and until it gets released with more professional translation, it's a bit all over the place.
I tried to make it better. If you don't like it: throw it away ( more than 3 steps, far far away). You like it- use it.
This is old synopsis:
"Our hero Nathan has a serious accident with his car.H e is getting better after 3 weeks in coma and he decide to get some vacations on an island. He's father island after 20 years. ...someone has a job to finish...they was waiting for him a lot ..."
This one's mine:
"Nathan wakes from a coma, three weeks after a car accident that nearly killed him.
Soon, he fully recovers. With new-gained perspective on life he decides to spend some time with his father, on an island he chose as his home. It's been 20 years since Nathan talked to him. This might be the last chance for them to make peace with each other.
But all that time someone's been waiting for him. Someone with a job to finish... Someone...
...something."
I tried to make it better. If you don't like it: throw it away ( more than 3 steps, far far away). You like it- use it.
This is old synopsis:
"Our hero Nathan has a serious accident with his car.H e is getting better after 3 weeks in coma and he decide to get some vacations on an island. He's father island after 20 years. ...someone has a job to finish...they was waiting for him a lot ..."
This one's mine:
"Nathan wakes from a coma, three weeks after a car accident that nearly killed him.
Soon, he fully recovers. With new-gained perspective on life he decides to spend some time with his father, on an island he chose as his home. It's been 20 years since Nathan talked to him. This might be the last chance for them to make peace with each other.
But all that time someone's been waiting for him. Someone with a job to finish... Someone...
...something."