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#181
DEEP SEA DANGER
Episode 55: When Larry Met Billy


Larry's rotund near-naked frame sweltered in the glare of the midday sun. His tanned face scrunched into an anguished ball of pain as his hunched back slowly crisped in the heat. With a near mechanical action, the leather palms of his cracked hands fed a steady line of cable into the ever hungry water. His pale blue eyes squinted at his watch from beneath wild unkempt eyebrows. “I really need to ask about that pay rise,” he considered briefly before hastily dismissing the idea as the realization set in that Doris was probably the only person crazy enough to employ him. It had been fifteen years now since she'd dragged him out of that bar in downtown Havana and sent him crashing face down into the gutter with one thunderous right hook*. Larry afforded himself a smile at the memory, rubbing the sandpaper that was his jaw as he licked the empty socket where the tooth had been with his whiskey soaked tongue. He and Doris had been friends and business partners ever since.

A couple of tugs on the safety line indicated a new request from the deep. He staggered back to his feet, placed his hands on his hips and arched his sagging body in an attempt to straighten out his heavily folded figure. Larry was certainly past his peak, and his peak really hadn't been anything more than a bump, but there was something about him that Doris valued. He was certainly cheap, but more importantly he was loyal and in a strange, whiskey-fueled way he was dependable. That in itself was vital for this line of employment

After a few minutes Larry retreated from the oxygen pump, wiping the stinging sweat from his eyes. Grabbing the ever present bottle, he tossed his head back and took a few thirsty swigs. “Wow," he croaked, wiping his mouth with the back of his hand. "This stuff really hits the -”. Larry was rudely interrupted by the billy club that came crashing down on the back of his skull. As he crumpled to the deck, the shadow of his assailant hovered over him menacingly.

“Oh boy,” sighed Larry's internal subconscious. “Out cold again.”


*As covered in episode 2 - ‘Hullabaloo in Havana'
#182
NEVER TOO OLD TO GIG!!! Never let anyone tell you that you are either!
If it's your health you're worried about just take it slow - but you can still do it, it's like riding a bike!

When I lived in Glasgow I used to go see these guys on a Tuesday night at the State Bar - I believe they're still playing there!
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=u1NkpoQah3g

As long as I have functioning arms and fingers I will play the guitar... and if not, I'll try with my teeth :D
#183
I actually started writing an entry on the day this competition was announced but I don't think I read the rules properly.

I thought there could be gaps between episodes as long as the main story arc was continued - like the missing reel in Planet Terror. I didn't think my idea would work as well without it so I parked it and ran away.

Oh what the heck... I'll fill in the gap, and shorten the serials so I release more than two. There does seem to be a common nautical theme here though.



DEEP SEA DANGER
Episode 54: The Descent

For any normal person the slow descent into the darkness would have been a real battle of mental endurance. The fading light and decreasing temperature slowly smothering the part of the brain responsible for bravado and hubris. Not for ‘Deep Sea' Doris. To Doris this was child's play. She peered downwards through the murky water. There couldn't be much further to go now. “Larry better have got his coordinates right this time” she mused to herself. As the tinny echo of her words subsided, the broken hull of the Scuttling Scotsman melted into view. Doris grinned. “Larry you old dog” she murmured slowly, her thoughts already shifting focus onto the importance of what this discovery might mean. Could she really be this close to changing the course of history?

Her metal boots planted themselves in the ocean bed causing a mushroom cloud of silt to envelope her diving suit. It may have been a smothering combination of rubber and metal but not even the suit could conceal her voluptuous body. The tiny creatures of the deep froze for a moment to take in her form, before scattering away from the copper-headed intruder. Doris checked her lifeline, tugged the signal for a new supply of fresh oxygen and started to trudge towards the wreck.

The Scuttling Scotsman was indeed a sorry sight to behold, listed to one side and split near in two down the middle. If the legend of its doomed voyage was to be believed however, then it was actually looking in much better condition than she had expected. Clambering over the natural obstacles of the seabed, Doris made her way to the stern of the vessel. She carefully negotiated the boats rotting shell, probing the crustacean riddled timber for an entry point. “Come on old girl” she said coaxingly, “give me something to work with here.” The encouragement seemed to work, a few steps further forward and the wooden skeleton opened up its rib-cage into a splintered archway leading into the darkness of the vessel. Doris paused. “Here goes nothing” she thought, before striding purposefully into the black.
#184
The Rumpus Room / Re: The Points Game
Mon 16/05/2016 15:25:55
a line that scores more often
#185
AGS Games in Production / Re: God's Algorithm
Mon 16/05/2016 14:38:59
Such stunning artwork, it's almost understated in a way but the detail is sublime - love the concrete base rising out of the forest.

Just looking at that last screenshot - like true Bluesmen do we get to squeeze that lemon? And what is that thing on top of the chest of drawers.

Anyway, it looks and sounds fantastic.
#186
QuoteBlind scoring

Unfortunately the Dutch didn't qualify :D .... sorry, (bad) football joke, i'll get my coat.

Here's my random scores - Austria Hungary is going to be a cracker.

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Jun-10   20:00   France   2  vs   0   Romania
Jun-11   14:00   Albania   1   vs   1   Switzerland
Jun-11   17:00   Wales   1   vs   1   Slovakia
Jun-11   20:00   England   3   vs   0   Russia
Jun-12   14:00   Turkey   2   vs   2   Croatia
Jun-12   17:00   Poland   2   vs   1   N Ireland
Jun-12   20:00   Germany   3   vs   0   Ukraine
Jun-13   14:00   Spain   1   vs   0   Czech Rep
Jun-13   17:00   Rep Ireland   1   vs   2   Sweden
Jun-13   20:00   Belgium   1   vs   1   Italy
Jun-14   17:00   Austria   7   vs   7   Hungary
Jun-14   20:00   Portugal   2   vs   0   Iceland
Jun-15   14:00   Russia   0   vs   1   Slovakia
Jun-15   17:00   Romania   2   vs   0   Switzerland
Jun-15   20:00   France   3  vs   0   Albania
Jun-16   14:00   England   2   vs   1   Wales
Jun-16   17:00   Ukraine   1   vs   1   N Ireland
Jun-16   20:00   Germany   2   vs   1   Poland
Jun-17   14:00   Italy   1   vs   1   Sweden
Jun-17   17:00   Czech Rep   1   vs   2   Croatia
Jun-17   20:00   Spain   2   vs   0   Turkey
Jun-18   14:00   Belgium   2   vs   1   Rep Ireland
Jun-18   17:00   Iceland   0   vs   0   Hungary
Jun-18   20:00   Portugal   4   vs   1   Austria
Jun-19   20:00   Romania   1   vs   0   Albania
Jun-19   20:00   Switzerland   0   vs   2   France
Jun-20   20:00   Russia   0   vs   2   Wales
Jun-20   20:00   Slovakia   0   vs   1   England
Jun-21   17:00   N Ireland   1   vs   2   Germany
Jun-21   17:00   Ukraine   1   vs   1   Poland
Jun-21   20:00   Croatia   1   vs   3   Spain
Jun-21   20:00   Czech Rep   1   vs   2   Turkey
Jun-22   17:00   Hungary   1   vs   2   Portugal
Jun-22   17:00   Iceland   2   vs   0   Austria
Jun-22   20:00   Italy   1   vs   1   Rep Ireland
Jun-22   20:00   Sweden   1   vs   2   Belgium
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#187
As much as it hates me to say it, Milner under Klopp looks like a new player (much like most of Liverpool's squad) and might actually have some value. To be honest, if England are going to stand a chance, G-unit Neville needs to get his boots dusted down - he's the difference maker ;)

Chris Coleman as we speak is busy packaging Bale up in bubble wrap, foam and horse placenta.

In terms of the big teams, I wouldn't mind seeing France or Portugal win it - looking forward to seeing more of Renato Sanches after all the hype.

It would be phenomenal if another Greece/Leicester style story happened.
#188
I would agree re: England - in Harry Kane they finally have a proper front man again. What I would worry about is the central spine behind him, although I think Chris Smalling is looking good at the moment... especially when compared with calamity Cahill. Still, expect them to crash out at the group stage while Wales qualify - Wales to do a Leicester.

Germany will probably win it though... although the hosts could be a contender.
#189
A classic. Surely game of the year 2015.
#190
The Rumpus Room / Re: Name the Game
Fri 13/05/2016 15:11:30
It's Match Day II - I pass my turn to Cassie :D
#191
The Rumpus Room / Re: Name the Game
Fri 13/05/2016 10:21:07
Prepare to be.... AMAZED... no sign of Des though.

http://www.worldofspectrum.org/infoseekid.cgi?id=0003073
#192
The Rumpus Room / Re: Name the Game
Fri 13/05/2016 09:28:48
Match of the Day? Don't tell me there was a MOTD game! Was Des Lynam in it?
#194
Certainly looks interesting - I have to admit I'd never even heard of GameJolt until I released my game a few weeks ago and saw it was a recommended AGS hosting option. Nothing but good things to say about it, very impressed.
#195
Love the art style, reminds me of puzzle books I use to read when I was younger. Also, I do like a good amnesiac hero :-D!

Look forward to the finished game.
#196
I'll be entering... unlike my shambolic motherland.
#197
Haha - it was a very expressive eye roll, well animated!
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The eye roll worked best on the dead body outside the church, I could understand it with that - it was the 'object under the bed' that I thought needed an explanation as to why he wouldn't take it - I wanted to pick it up (thought I might need to cut some trousers off someone :D). Speaking of which that's a nice historic reference re: women's underwear - maybe you could get it from the nightwitch? Of course you could leave it as it is - it works.
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Ooo I haven't seen these games before (I was basically on a non-game playing mission until my own was finished), I'll give them a play.
#198
I completed this tonight, good job!

The game balances humour alongside the reality of war which can be hard to do. It didn't take too long to complete and I was able to work out all the puzzles without the need for help.

The things I liked were:
- humour, there are some good jokes in here ranging from characters and dialog jokes to cutscenes
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My name is Ivan :-D
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- this particular war setting is not one I have seen in a point and click before and was very atmospheric
- The two lead characters were an interesting pair and it would be good to see them in a follow up as they continue their missions.
- The animation and artwork is superb! The animations are really well put together
- In a weird way...
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I was impressed by the surprise of being shot dead on the roof near the gas room! Didn't see that coming!
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If I had any constructive feedback it would be:
- look into developing some of the puzzles - for example:
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When getting the new pants (:-D) - you have a lovely room full of various characters but in the end all you do is ask Olga for a pair and then go change in the room. Unless there were other ways of solving this that I missed, you could expand this puzzle so you need to trade for pants, or win some pants off one of the characters in the medical room (although maybe not the person with one leg... that would be mean :) ).
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- These are only minor things but you could also add a little polish to some parts of the game - there's a few walk behind issues in the two level room where the player appears in front of the ceiling when they should be under it. But these are easily fixed. There were also a few times where I would click on something and he just rolls his eyes and shrugs - it might be good for him to say something about those objects but no biggie.

Overall I enjoyed playing the game, it asks some good questions about the morals of war while entertaining along the way. Like me, I know coding is something you've been learning along the way and I think you've done a good job.

Look forward to potential sequels!
#199
Excellent news! Look forward to playing it! :-D
#200
Sorry for the double post but this is more of an update for those people with version 1.3.0 - it seems I introduced a bug at this point which could be game ending if the player doesn't have a certain item.

I've now fixed this in version 1.4.0 - see main post

Sorry about that :(
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