OK, since I played the game, I think it's my duty to comment on it.
First of all, the only thing I didn't like was the game's length. It was too short. However, I shouldn't complain about that, since you said that it's less then an hour of gameplay.
The idea is nice and the atmosphere is brilliant. Some (not many) of the dialogues could be improved, but the writing in general is very good.
The music is GREAT. I have listened to the non-digital soundtrack but it still rules.
I don't mind the lack of puzzles at all. The story is plot-driven and the plot is interesting enough to compensate for that.
And finally, the thing I like the most...
BACKGROUND ART! I really really REALLY loved it! It fits with the atmosphere so well and even on its own it is brilliant.
So, what you should do (in my opinion) is to make a full length game (or movie) with similar (or the same?) characters, story and definitely the same style of drawing. And add some up-down walking cycles.
First of all, the only thing I didn't like was the game's length. It was too short. However, I shouldn't complain about that, since you said that it's less then an hour of gameplay.
The idea is nice and the atmosphere is brilliant. Some (not many) of the dialogues could be improved, but the writing in general is very good.
The music is GREAT. I have listened to the non-digital soundtrack but it still rules.
I don't mind the lack of puzzles at all. The story is plot-driven and the plot is interesting enough to compensate for that.
And finally, the thing I like the most...
BACKGROUND ART! I really really REALLY loved it! It fits with the atmosphere so well and even on its own it is brilliant.
So, what you should do (in my opinion) is to make a full length game (or movie) with similar (or the same?) characters, story and definitely the same style of drawing. And add some up-down walking cycles.