1) Quite nice renders, but I suggest using a camera for getting the shot (if you simply rendered perspective view) and messing with camera settings a bit. Well configured field of view(FOV) on camera would eliminate large areas at the front but still keep acceptable perspective.
2) The notes on bulleting board really DO look like boxes, make them more flat, the shadows they cast are really weird.
3) Use more ambient lights! The contrast between exposed and dark areas is too heavy.
4) Add lights a bit of tone, 100% white light doesn't exist in world so a slight amount of yellow (if it's sun/outside light, some other) could make everything a bit more warm.
5) Don't use "metal" shader on fire extinguisher(sp?), use "antisotropic" instead.
6) Think before applying materials. It's like a war of colors out there, no interior designer would use sooo different colors in simple room - yellow box on white wall next to blue sign, next to red extingusher next to brown benches, next to green bulletin board, etc
7) Think about first room, the area where benches are.
The benches are way too low to sit there. But if they were higher, sitting people would cover bulletin board, so no-one could read what's on board. Does placing benches infront of boards make any sense?
2) The notes on bulleting board really DO look like boxes, make them more flat, the shadows they cast are really weird.
3) Use more ambient lights! The contrast between exposed and dark areas is too heavy.
4) Add lights a bit of tone, 100% white light doesn't exist in world so a slight amount of yellow (if it's sun/outside light, some other) could make everything a bit more warm.
5) Don't use "metal" shader on fire extinguisher(sp?), use "antisotropic" instead.
6) Think before applying materials. It's like a war of colors out there, no interior designer would use sooo different colors in simple room - yellow box on white wall next to blue sign, next to red extingusher next to brown benches, next to green bulletin board, etc
7) Think about first room, the area where benches are.
The benches are way too low to sit there. But if they were higher, sitting people would cover bulletin board, so no-one could read what's on board. Does placing benches infront of boards make any sense?