What I call bad shape is drawing something that really fits well and contributes, but falls short because of weak shape.
Your plants. If I add a green plant to my room, I will make it big, healthy, and so it really adds some green to the room. Both on background for eye candy and also as really somehow picked a plant to make his room greener. You wouldn't keep a dead tree or flower in your room, wouldn't you? But that's pretty much how your plants look: dead. They fit here, but have very little effect due small size. It's believable in a tiny apartment, or if it was a banzai tree... but a big corridor?
http://aquafit-usa.com/sunroom.jpg
Now that's a healthy plant that really adds greenery to the room.
Of course it doesn't have to be so big, just well-placed, like this:
http://artificialtreesplants.com/files/artficial_tree_plant_living_room_2.jpg
It's matter of taste actually... I don't suggest turning your corridor into greenhouse.
But from artistical viewpoint, your plants won't contribute enough and with most of the room being red/yellow/beige, more green would be reasonable to balance colors out. Plants could have done this, but didn't.
Table is also bad shape. It looks like it was made using stone age tools. Yet everything else looks classy and advanced/luxurious.
EDIT: also noticed that perspective on light switch is wrong. Make it's upper edge horisontal!
Your plants. If I add a green plant to my room, I will make it big, healthy, and so it really adds some green to the room. Both on background for eye candy and also as really somehow picked a plant to make his room greener. You wouldn't keep a dead tree or flower in your room, wouldn't you? But that's pretty much how your plants look: dead. They fit here, but have very little effect due small size. It's believable in a tiny apartment, or if it was a banzai tree... but a big corridor?
http://aquafit-usa.com/sunroom.jpg
Now that's a healthy plant that really adds greenery to the room.
Of course it doesn't have to be so big, just well-placed, like this:
http://artificialtreesplants.com/files/artficial_tree_plant_living_room_2.jpg
It's matter of taste actually... I don't suggest turning your corridor into greenhouse.
But from artistical viewpoint, your plants won't contribute enough and with most of the room being red/yellow/beige, more green would be reasonable to balance colors out. Plants could have done this, but didn't.
Table is also bad shape. It looks like it was made using stone age tools. Yet everything else looks classy and advanced/luxurious.
EDIT: also noticed that perspective on light switch is wrong. Make it's upper edge horisontal!