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and 5- Don't be affraid to give exceptions when needed. You'll be in front of intelligent peoples.
Ex. Some video games story are more weak (like FPS) some other are way stronger.

Like FPS? Do you ever played Crysis or medal of honor? Excluding RPG`s, the story is essential to a good FPS. I think racing games have much less story than FPS`s... If this was just an example without really exemples, sorry  but i was just trying to help too...

And well, FPS aren`t just shooters, they are a game that try to make you feel like the main character, the industries are trying even more to make the player feel like he is in the game. This is why there is customization, to make the character look like the player, or make someone that the player would like to be.

Good Luck  and don`t forget to use a valid deodorant 

i didn`t undestand Bog graveyard but...

idea - Jerakeen

Atmosphere - Jerakeen

Design - Bog

Composition - Rharpe

Functionality - Bog

Technique - Bog

nice animation!  But i think she bunces too much, she look like she's shacking.

it's good but, HE DONT HAVE HANDS?

the characters head isn't bouncing, try to move it a little when walking.
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i already done that, but i don't had a good result... Well, what i know, is that the critics lounge is for critic, and not ask for this kind of help, i don't want suggestions, i want help. This is a mat, a track, something like these. I fliped vertically, but it seems to come back to the normal state...
J-

Hi! i'm making an animation to my game, i have some perspective issues with it... here is the images:









from image 5, the frame turns bigger,  but i will adjust it in the future. I just don't have a clue on how to continue, if someone can help me, please ;]
Thanks J-

my problem of the behemoth is that i don't like behemoths. As i said, it's a personal like thing.
J-

i like more the original one.  :

AH! Now i get it... it`s because the way the slime is, its look like an alien. 

i play toris passage this way: I click with right button on the icon of the exe and select in the last label COMPABILITY or something like this, and then select windows 98. It will run on 256 colors and work!

What is that? I`m sorry but i really don`t know what is this... it`s an alien? Oh, it`s a GUI... Slimer frenquently confuse aliens and GUI`s.
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yeah, it`s a lot better, but if i was making this background (but i`m not), but i was saying IF i was making (you`re not), shut up!, No! Shut up you! Go eat some ice cream! No, you gonna eat ice cream! Shut up Slimer! Shut up you Jakerpot! Ok, now that i resolved things with my mind, named Slimer, i was saying that if i was making this bg, i wouldn`t draw that behemoth on the back. It remind me of final fantasy and 4 hours of fighting last boss on playstation 1. Just for personal like.
and just a OBS: PixelJoint is awsome! The guys are freaks made of pixels!

Sorry for my bad-esducationed mind. He piss me off sometimes.
J-

Nothing to do with maniac mansion, it`s all diferent, you can say it`s the same style, i say no, it`s more original than that, i don`t play maniac mansion to have ideas to my game, the ideas come from my mind 

no, i don`t have money, just if he want to work for me for 5 dollars a hour 
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i think the right side of the sand, the dark shade, look like it`s unfinished. Putting more dunes there will make the job!

Damn modify button that isn`t working on my pc...
Ok, i finished another part of the dungeon the next is to change the floor to something more dirty, but i can`t find the correct color! If you can helo me finding a color little darker than this one, i would be glad, because i tryed and tryed and the color didn`t arrived... Well, i was thinking on add something more... A little pond water (sorry, i`m not american, is that right?) on the floor, a closed place like this one should have some humidity, i think. Well, the backgroynd is 100,000,000 times better than the original, but i will keep it to do a comparison later. What more can i do on this one? Ah, Eureka! If i add a droping water on the ceiling? i think it would be great don`t?
before i forget:

here is the new one. I was thinking, wouldn`t be better if the room itself where more dark?
J-

what exactly you want to do? Animate it? Change it height by script`s? It will distort it if it`s possible. But, why you want to do that? 

WOW! Awsome work dude!    :o
i don`t think anything to change, but adding a skeleton or something half burried on the sand would be great!
J-

yeah, the screens are the same  but the room is good for your first attempt, i`m not a expert or something, it`s just my opinion, and no one should be good to opine. Well, you could add more details on the walls, think in what kind of appartment is this considering social classes; Very Poor one, Poor one, Mid Poor one, Mid one, Good one or Very Good one. From Very Poor one to Poor one, you could add more dirty borders, some painting falling from the wall, cracks and destroyed watter pipes. Mid ones, it should have a bigger tv i think, a 24 inches one or more (remember, just a opinion). What is that in front of the TV? Add  a computer or something, a sofa and a toilet! Where does he make his necessities??? (hehehe) Think if you have 100-200, 300-400, 500-600 or more U$$ in your wallet, what would you change in your apartment?IT`s his home, make it based on his personality!
And just a OBS, the blanket it`s too tiny! make it bigger, touching the floor and covering the bed (adding a retail sewn on it would be good to add detail  )
Thanks for reading it all! (or not)
J-