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#421
Srry about the double post, but this damn modify button always (14 times now) links to a broken page... Ok, my game is with new graphics! Wow, ok, just the dungeon one, go to the critics lounge (there:  ) and confirm it! They are a lot better, with more details and no black lines! I will re-made every room this way to emprove the graphics! Stay alert to updates!
#422
Critics' Lounge / Re: Rate my art and critic!
Sat 14/02/2009 02:12:34
Ok, thanks  :D
I will round that pipe and make it "maybe" dirty red, like a rusty one. The main character should fit inside it, so i can do a great animation on it. more suggestions? And ALPHA2T: How you mean much random? how can i fix it?
Thanks! J-
#423
well, why can`t you change it just in German? I think no one will notice if you add more details in other language  ;)
#424
i think you could draw the sign like a post, in the high, like on the real life, i think it would look a lot better  :)
#425
Critics' Lounge / Re: Rate my art and critic!
Fri 13/02/2009 19:50:20
Thanks!  :D i tested changing the black outline for a colored one. It work`s! Yes, i think a rounded pipe would be better, don`t?
i will animate the candle, it was my idea, but i putted in the background just to you see it. I will have to apply the changes to the other rooms too... I just made a few, but now i gonna focus on this room.
J-
#426
Critics' Lounge / Re: Rate my art and critic!
Fri 13/02/2009 15:06:10
Ok  ;) i will post the new dungeon tonight. I'v done a new grate putting a concrete frame arround it. I will put more details at the floor and ceiling, and some more things. And also update the other ones.
EDIT: Here is the new background, is 10000000 times better than the last one!



What do you think???
J-
#427
Critics' Lounge / Re: Rate my art and critic!
Fri 13/02/2009 14:45:28
Oh, i saw the diference! Thanks!
EDIT: Do you think i should do it with the other rooms? Or they look more "right"?
J-
#428
Critics' Lounge / Re: Rate my art and critic!
Thu 12/02/2009 23:31:46
The answer of the character feet is: It wasn`t i who drawn he  :o it was Lo_Res_man, which don`t respond my PM`s anymore... well, i think you are wrong too Houchin. Look at the celling line. Did you saw, that when more high is the object, more curved down is the line? This is my perspective, the line should be more curved down on the top of the cage, and more curved up on the floor...
#429
aren`t the transparency option in AGS import sprite window selected as no transparency? Change it to botom right or whatever you want.
#430
Critics' Lounge / Re: Rate my art and critic!
Thu 12/02/2009 20:50:58
thank you very much, i don`t like to draw this way, with points and guide lines, i just draw and adjust if i feel it`s wrong. I bet most of the people don`t this kind of errors, but when done right it`s look more beautiful.
J-
#431
no, you have fuel! Is not like in maniac mansion, but ok, like, if you are in a hospital, this would make much noise, the hammer too, soo you have to find another way to open the damn door, a key wouldn`t do it, because the key and all the copies where thrown on acid. Maybe you could remove the screws and bring down the door?
#432
Sweet   :D this guy makes good art. GOOOOD art.
#433
Critics' Lounge / Re: Rate my art and critic!
Thu 12/02/2009 19:05:06
oh, yes. Do you think if i make the cage bigger, and exclude de celing of it, it will be on a good angle? so the player will not see it top, just a line.
J-
#434
Critics' Lounge / Re: Rate my art and critic!
Thu 12/02/2009 15:57:57
Well, everyone is critic! Bog, i don`t know what you mean with the cage, but the hole with the bars, is just that! A hole with some bars! If you play my game you will understand what is that thing on the ceiling, it`s not a duct, it`s a "pipe" but not a water or air pipe, a people pipe (don`t try to understand). Well, as i see i have some work to do  :-\ but let see someothers critics.
Thanks! J-
#435
Critics' Lounge / Rate my art and critic!
Thu 12/02/2009 05:14:39
Hi everyone, i will post them some samples of my art from mansion break, i wanted to ask you what can i change to make it look better. ThankS!


Dr.Cliche


Corridors In Game


Dungeon Just Background



The Machines Room Just Background


Secret Room In Game

Thanks!
#436
 ;D so you have money huh? Just kidding. This backgrounds should be very expensive  :-X if i could draw this way, i could earn some money too.
#437
TORIN`S PASSAGE! This is THE game! Thank you very much! I will get a way to get this game *evil grim*
i played many years ago (not maaaany, bu many) and wanted to play it again.
J-
#438
Wow! Amazing! how much hours/days you spent in one background???
They are beutifull!  :D
#439
no one?
#440
Ok, thank`s! I will have to make a great change in PC interface. It has made by rooms, but this can be a little incovenient, because of the change between them, so i think frames can do it great. But it will be tested and rated, if necessary i will change it.
EDIT: It seems the characters Cherry and CC aren`t showing the images... So please, click on the till i resolve it  :D
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