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#21
Curtis Harrison, coughing the first of the morning's dust out of his lungs, rolled out and up out of the small squat of a mattress he'd taken to in the room above the saloon bar. A finger of bourbon trickled out of the glass he'd just knocked over, which proceeded to roll out into the hallway. The growl over the floorboards was stopped by the tapping of a shoe, and Curtis looked up.

There was Molly. She looked pleased with herself, but that was natural for a dame who tormented his every waking hour, not least of all for ignoring his advances.

"You look like you enjoyed yerself a whole hog last night."
"Can't say I 'member a thing," Curtis remarked, slumping back down on to the bed again, "Wait... what day is it?"
"The day after yest'rday," Molly smirked, turning to head back down to the bar, "Either way, you have a bit of explaining to do downstairs, so I wouldn't wait up."
"Ain't it...?" But she'd already rattled down the staircase. There was an arrangement, wasn't there? The open door wasn't giving him any answers, so he grabbed his hat and half-walked half-stumbled after her.

Curtis wasn't what you'd call the lucky type, but he'd survived his recurring bad decisions on wagers, women and whiskey so far. When he reached the bottom of the stairs, it looked like one of his ill-informed choices had come to fruition again. Molly had moved over to a pile of splintered wood that once could've been bar furniture, and was picking out planks that might be given a second service in life. Walter McKinney stood in front of the bar trying to uncover all of the floor within the mess.

"Ahh. The rooster's up." The barman looked up from his sweeping brush and lent it against the bar to survey his bedraggled lodger. Curtis was still attempting to take in the incomplete scene, previously finished business now being tidied into separate piles of glass and timber. Walter folded his arms and took on a schoolmasters gaze. "Yer sure got yerself into a heap of trouble this time."

"Aww, don't look so blue at me, Walter. It ain't me been raising Cain down here." Curtis half-shrugged and leant to support himself on the bannister, one of the few saloon features still intact.
"This here I ain't too fussed over, I seen it before." The stern look on Walter's face didn't change, making Curtis a little uneasy with his initial cocksure stance. "But damned I'll be if you ain't ridin' the rails before sundown."
"Hey, I'm all abroad here. Unless yer just bein' an old croaker yer gonna have to fill me in." This seemed to tip Walter over whatever restraint he'd been trying to keep, turning his stare into a scowl.
"If you ain't twigged it by now, just pack your plunder and skedaddle, 'cause I ain't housin' yer slazy hide no more."
"Hey!" Molly cut in, giving Walter a matching glare, "He may get soaked but he ain't no criminal."
"It's alright Molly. I'm still stumped but yous no need to cover my back, I was thinkin' o' leavin' this day anyways." The yell of activity suddenly came with it a level of sobriety, and Curtis started off towards the doors, and pushed through the daylight, leaving Molly sighing at the swinging doors and Walter with a parting comment.
"I tell you Molly, he's just trouble, and this time he's as good as gone."

The day was settled in, and Curtis began to remember his deed of the evening. An old acquaintance had shored up in town to get him to pony up some old settlement. It had started pleasant, but before long he'd shot his mouth off and made some folks uncomfortable. He'd sure been fobbed off, alright. And now he knew he had to leave town. Curtis untied his long-suffering companion from the saloon front and climbed up to prepare his exit. Looking down to the south, he could see another rider, blurred out in the glare of the sun. It had to be him.

"You goin' somewhere?" came the gruffled shout from the figure just as Curtis turned the horse to the northern side of town. He kept his eyes low and shuffled his steed into a canter. He could get away with this, right? It had worked before. Just settle up in another town to keep the head low for a little while, let the wind blow whatever misdeeds he'd been unlucky enough to stumble in to and find someone to ride the river with from another saloon.

Curtis was approaching the town limits at a fair speed just as a shot rang out from behind. Curtis grimaced and waited for the stab of pain, the stain of blood. But he wasn't hit! He was going to get away with it!

The last thing Curtis saw that day was the sight of the town sign, proudly displaying 'Welcome to Leadville! : Population 65', swinging down towards his face.
#22
I have an idea! I may very well enter!
#23
The game now has an intro of some description!

#25
Started work on this again... all of the main characters have been designed and sprited (apart from the queens - tricky minxes they are). Also started adding more detail to the rooms to make it look a bit more interesting (compare to original screen in OP):



I feel like I could get a barebones game done in a couple of weeks after this spurt, but an actual release? Who knows...
#26
A Year Without Light

After the second month, I think I had finally accepted it. Sounds came through with a renewed clarity, every scent began to reveal more secrets of my surroundings, and my hands built up shapes in my head of the places around me. I was still bitter, I guess; there were always things - patterns and colours - that I was going to miss. My memory still acted out with images of how things once were, but more and more I had to rely on my other senses.

I think when I realised the things I could still do, the things I could at least fall back on, maybe half a year later, like continue to interact with my friends and family, just to talk and laugh, to read (at least, it took me longer to get through a novel than it used to, my fingers were still slow without practice) and to make music. Oh music! There were hurdles to overcome, of course; I had always tried to practice the guitar with my eyes closed, but now I had no choice.

Back in the beginning I used to hide away in my music collection as if it was the only thing I could enjoy anymore, as if that damn accident had actually ended my life right there but then cruelly left me in some afterlife limbo of darkness. Eventually, I realised that instead of music being an insular activity I could really use it to be myself again, a form of expression I had forever took for granted before.

I have the time to just sit and think a lot now, and at least three months ago I started to feel comfortable actually talking about it to people. The usual questions would come up, "How do you cope without it?", "What do you most miss?", but I felt I could answer them confidently now. It's weird that it should've taken this long, I always thought I'd be ready for anything, but as is often the case - it doesn't always work out that way.

Nowadays, there's the occasional science report I hear that talks about electronic retinas and wired links to the visual cortex; the miracle of sight restoration becoming a reality in the modern age. But I think I've finally found my own light at the end of the tunnel. If offered, I'm not sure I would say 'yes'...


[This is completely fictional. I've got terrible eyesight, and whilst at the moment glasses and contact lenses mean I'm okay, I'm still terrified that one day I'll go blind. So I guess this is kinda how I hope I would be able to take it.]
#27
I don't see any miscounting of votes?  ::)

But seriously, someone has to set up the next one...
#28
I'd like to vote Ponch because it entertained me the most.
My second vote goes to anian because despite the occasional sloppy mistake, it took me in the most.
I did like both Diath's and kconan's but they didn't quite click with me in the end.
And obi's I felt was a grand attempt at stream-of-consciousness art.

So overall on my count the prizes go thus:

First place to Diath! (3 votes)

Second place to anian! (2 votes and 1 2nd vote)

Third place to Ponch! (1 vote and 1 2nd vote)

Thank you to the other contestants! Let the competition roll on!

EDIT: What?
#29
Whoop whoop! One more entry it is!

NOW we can vote :)
#30
If you've got an entry in the next five hours... I'll let you off...
#31
Righty-o! Comp over chaps/chapesses!

Four Entries to vote for Obi, Anian, Diath and Kconan... get to it. I'll give you till Sunday...

I'll post my comments soon... :)
#32
Awesome, now we have enough entries for trophies!

Can we have more!??!? One day left!
#33
Great entry... come on guys, about a week to go... TROPHIES!

#34
Okay... here's my first go at this...

The theme of the writing competition is Transatlantic!

Recently (i.e. yesterday), I travelled over the Atlantic to live in the USA for the next six months, which as you might expect is a pretty big deal for me. So as a kind of trigger for what the topic could entail, here's some bullets:

Maybe you could write about:

  • A transatlantic crossing? By some form of new dirigible? plane? submarine? ship?
  • A goodbye between two intimately related characters? Someone leaving on the Titanic
  • A Valentine's sub theme perhaps, with a letter sent across the water?
  • Two fictional warring factions separated by a large watery mass that happens to be called the Atlantic?

There are no limits to the type of prose, story, poem or song (the one by Death Cab for Cutie comes to mind) you want to write... so go wild!

I will make trophies a little later.. entries in by sometime on the 24th February

(Lemme know if I've missed something)

WINNER IS ANIAN!
#35
Thanks chaps! I'll get on to a new one soon... I think I might have a good topic...
#36
I can see Akatosh's as something that could kinda be on a TV from Requiem for a Dream, albeit a bit less maniacal.

Probably needed a few flashing visuals of people on rollercoasters, cruises, skydiving, a bus hurtling towards the camera... before cutting back to some slick presenter and a number appearing at the bottom of the screen... just my interpretation :)

EDIT: That was a vote for Akatosh by the way :P
#37
Never tried this before, but it felt good to write this piece. I may do it again sometime.



He woke up, vision slowly arriving to focus the darkened space of his apartment bedroom. He blinked once. That was better. Things seemed to become more clear. What was that dream about? It had something to do with... Claire?

A shape shifted on the bed beside him. I'd better not wake her he thought, it's still early. He imagined it must be a Sunday morning, and decided to freshen up. He swung his legs off the side of the bed and padded over the carpet towards the en-suite. He tugged on the dangling cord holding the porcelain fish that had long since been battered and bruised from cracks on the bathroom wall.

Nothing turned on.

Ahh damn. He was sure he had changed the bulb recently, but nothing seemed to stay working in this new place of his. He stood a while, pausing to examine his face in the mirror, just visible in the half light. The shadows seemed to blur his features and lines slightly, making his face look more youthful somehow. Dismayed by his lack of progress, he returned through the bedroom to enter the main studio lounge, and the dawn light hovered behind the blinds. Maybe I'll find myself a warm coffee around the local cafe, he thought, as his gaze lingered a moment on the cluttered table tops of his kitchenette. Nothing was going to happen here.

He found himself outside, running on autopilot towards South Street. These pavements had been well rehearsed, but there was a nagging tug from the back of his mind that something was different, or strange somehow. His gaze remained slightly downward, playing the subconscious game of dodging the cracks with each footfall.

He pushed on through the glass panel door of the local coffee shop. Mario's? Mirando's? The sign above had long since been reduced to less than a handful of letters and held only a brief clue to what had once existed. The buzz of a television repeat on a high stand played out above the counter, slightly overpowering the noise of the coffee machines and a pair of early risers sat together, but faced away on a table in the corner. An attendant leant back against the sideboard, gave a cursory glance at the door, then turned back towards the black box with almost an ignorant shrug.

He called out his order and sat down at a table by the window. The day was already brighter, but he couldn't remember exactly when the sun had risen. A coffee was placed in front of him and remained untouched. Instead, he looked out at the figures passing by on the street. These local shops never changed, surviving despite the rise of the modern shopping mall. He wondered how. Apart from that thought, his mind was curiously blank. Empty space where he imagined thoughts should be, why was he up so early anyway? Did he have somewhere to be?

He spotted someone crossing the road towards the cafe. Was that... his mother? The figure ignored his gaze through the glass and proceeded to open the door, turning to face it with one hand on the handle to carefully guide it closed.

"Hello? ... Mum?"

The woman walked over to the table and finally met his eyes and flashed a smile. "Hello dear, I thought I'd find you here."

"What are you doing?" he asked, idly fingering the cup in front of him but not lifting it.

"You haven't realised yet have you?"

"Realised what?" He'd left the cup alone now, and had his arms crossed on the table in front of him, full attention on the figure that was his mother.

"You always were a little slow," she continued, ignoring his question, "even after graduation I thought you could've learnt a little more."

"I don't get it."

"Don't you recognise this place?"

"It's where I always come for coffee in the morning." He paused. "Isn't it?"

"Not exactly dear." She stopped to grab the chair opposite him and sat down. The other occupants of the room had not moved nor taken any interest in their conversation, nor had even seemed to notice the newcomer. "Do you remember what happened last night?" She continued, in the same manner that suggested the questions were not for her own benefit.

There was that blank again. There was that dream, sure, but even that felt slightly out of reach. "There was... a car? And Claire was there..." Even as the words stumbled out, he felt unsure of himself, as if he wasn't quite in control of where they had come from.

"You never did ask her out did you?"

"How did you...?" He started, startled. But before he could get any further he realised she was right. What was she doing back at his bed at home? "Where am I?" was the only remaining question he could muster.

She sighed, looked down at his drink, moved to hold his hand and looked back up to his now frightened face. "You are still dreaming, Martin. Only this time, I don't think you are going to wake up."

He remained static and sullen, staring at her with no other words to say.

"This coffee shop," she paused to look around, "was where I used to take you when you were young. I'm surprised you didn't think the decor too chintzy, far from the modern scene of cafe bars you seemed to hang around."

She carried on, seeing his continued vacant posture. "That porcelain fish in your bathroom isn't yours you know, it used to hang in your grandparents old bathroom, in their cottage in the countryside. I'm surprised you thought you would own such an odd piece, especially in your new apartment."

"How did you...?" He started again, and stopped at another blank as the woman ignored his interruption.

"I've been dead for several years, dear. And you've never looked younger, by the way." She smiled again. "What's happened has happened though, nothing can change that now."

"But what do I do now?"

"Well, this is your afterlife, dear, not mine. I'm only here, dredged up from your memories, delivering words you have already conjured up yourself." She began to stand, pushing the chair back lightly. "You should enjoy it whilst you still can." As she finished. she removed herself from the table, and carefully exited in the same manner as her entrance, and the door softly closed.

He looked outside again, his face no longer afraid or confused. The street outside had already changed.



(The story is based on the thought that your brain activity continues for 8 minutes after the rest of the body 'dies'. And a subconscious minute could effectively last a lifetime. I re-watched the film 'Waking Life' recently which kinda inspired it)
#38
Just saw the announcement... is the website not up yet?  ???
#39

Merry Christmas from the White Knight!
#40


Just a quick update. On its way still. Maybe not end 2010 and more start 2011 but carrying on regardless.
Room 4 out of 6 is operational, with about half the puzzles coded in so far. Then a slap of polish and it should be presentable :).
May be looking for a musician soon, looking for a midi soundtrack most likely, depends what I can conjure up myself.
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