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Thank's!
I tried to take all your advices and make a paintover myself. It already looks much better, I think. I'm curious what your opinion on this paintover is. 


 

hey eyes seem a little too far apart. is this sophia?

Your right .

Thanks for the comments. I'll try to update the sprite as soon as possible here.

The face, I guess. I don't know what to do about it.

Hi dear Critics Lounge

I need help on creating this female character for my game. I did alot of redrawings, but I'm not satisfied with the result at all.



She looks kinda dump lol. I would be thankfull for every kind of advice how to improve her (especially paintovers )

thanks, kaio

I use the Wacom Bamboo. It's said to be a beginners-pad, but I'm 100 % happy with it. It's also one of the cheapest, I think.

Thanks .
Uhhhm, maybe 7-8 hours, but I realy didn't count. I had a 4 week-break since the last time I worked on this, which makes counting the hours even more difficult.
This is my first photoshop-art at all, so there's nothing else to show you. But I'll certainly do some stuff in the future, since this is work for a whole poster of the fangame I'm working on.
Maybe I'll do somekind of tutorial later, when I know more excactly what I'm doing xD. But I got the "history" of the pic on my pc, since I worked with different layers in photoshop. If enyone would like to see it, I could upload something like this.

Just wanted to let you know, that I fnished him the last few days:

Phemar, your right! Thanks for the note, I'll fix it . When animating I loose the sight of the whole thing and get stuck on little details. But I never realised that glitch before. 

Hey ProgZmax, thanks for the efford, I appreciate. I'll think about changing the size.

Legs look nice. I'd change the shading on the arms and hands a bit so that when they are back they are more in a shadow. It's hard to tell how far forward and backward his arms are moving.

True, true. Maybe I'll add that on version 3 xD. And thanks to everyone, especially to Jakerpot  .

He's limping a little bit, isn't he?

Well, if so it's not intended  . Thanks for the comments!

I don't get tired of putting my Indiana Jones Artwork here . I revised my Indy walkcycle completely. Here's the old one again:


and here's V 2.0:


I redid almost everything. Added shading to the pants, for example...
I would welcome every kind of critique or comments!

Heya!

Wow, nice spirte! reminds me of Beneath a steal sky. Good job

I liked the 1st version better. The skin-color of the new one is too much red for me. But maybe it's just my screen, messing with the colors. 

Maybe you should add some highlights on the torso and head, too.  Did you try that already? Anyway, good job.

Wow, looks very Monkey-Island 2-ish to me. Good job!

I think both look great. The first line picture looks best imho. Nothing to improve here.

Hi all! I did a little Newspaper-Sprite for the news-section of the Secret of Pandora Indiana Jones page. I just wanted to get some constructive critism about it .
Here it is:


Also check http://secretofpandora.org/pandora/index.php?cat=02&l=eng for the animated version (which I didn't post here, because it consists of 2 layers and I was to lazy to add both to one animation )

greetz, kaio

Wow SpacePirateCaine, this is just wonderfull pixel-art! Congratulation

... as I promised: