UPDATE 1: I've now added a second draft below the first
UPDATE 2: There's now a second, very different, version - the third video in the list
UPDATE 3: I've now added a third version, at the bottom of the list. And I've removed Version 1, Draft 1, as I'm definitely not gonna use it. I'm thinking of using this new version as the main trailer, and then possibly using Version 2, Draft 1 as a second trailer, going into more detail about the mechanics (after changing the font and some other stuff to match this version). As always, any feedback will be greatly appreciated
UPDATE 4: There's now a second draft of the third version.
Hi all,
This is a first draft of a trailer I'm working on. I'm out of my comfort zone with this, so any feedback would be greatly appreciated - good, bad or ugly!
Please note that I'm going to be adding 'head bopping' type speech animations to my game, so hopefully that'll add at least a little more movement to some of the parts that are currently very static. I'll probably also show the cursor moving to any hotspots before they're asked about in conversation, partly to add movement, and partly to further highlight the mechanic.
Anyway, thanks in advance!
VERSION 1, DRAFT 2
VERSION 2, DRAFT 1
VERSION 3, DRAFT 1
VERSION 3, DRAFT 2
UPDATE 2: There's now a second, very different, version - the third video in the list
UPDATE 3: I've now added a third version, at the bottom of the list. And I've removed Version 1, Draft 1, as I'm definitely not gonna use it. I'm thinking of using this new version as the main trailer, and then possibly using Version 2, Draft 1 as a second trailer, going into more detail about the mechanics (after changing the font and some other stuff to match this version). As always, any feedback will be greatly appreciated

UPDATE 4: There's now a second draft of the third version.
Hi all,
This is a first draft of a trailer I'm working on. I'm out of my comfort zone with this, so any feedback would be greatly appreciated - good, bad or ugly!
Please note that I'm going to be adding 'head bopping' type speech animations to my game, so hopefully that'll add at least a little more movement to some of the parts that are currently very static. I'll probably also show the cursor moving to any hotspots before they're asked about in conversation, partly to add movement, and partly to further highlight the mechanic.
Anyway, thanks in advance!
VERSION 1, DRAFT 2
VERSION 2, DRAFT 1
VERSION 3, DRAFT 1
VERSION 3, DRAFT 2