Okay, I just read the lot. The humour is -great-, you're really actually trying to be funny as opposed to a lot of those awful web comics that just try to emulate conversations people have had with their friends that they think are funny to other people but aren't. You're are ACTUALLY funny and I like the humour a lot ^_^ As far as the art, I think it's okay but could definitely do with some cleaning up. Just working on peoples' bodies and stances and making them seem a little less stiff will make a huge difference I think. Sorry, I know this isn't C&C but I would have given you an empty compliment if I thought it was just okay, but I really thought your writing was awesome so I'd like to see you keep going and improve! I promise I'm not trying to be patronising :/