Nice details, but
- it's quite hard to get a sense of the scale - might be improved by
- having the haze start a bit earlier
- the river thinning and zigzagging in the distance
- the cliff edge not being quite so straight
- it seems like two perspectives forced together
- perhaps if the top of the cliff curved away from the horizon on the left it would help
- it's quite hard to get a sense of the scale - might be improved by
- having the haze start a bit earlier
- the river thinning and zigzagging in the distance
- the cliff edge not being quite so straight
- it seems like two perspectives forced together
- perhaps if the top of the cliff curved away from the horizon on the left it would help