1st thing. I never use a graphics tablet when drawing sprites of this size. Reason? Because its more trouble than it is worth. the kind of detail you need at this size involves pixelling with a mouse. You need to decide where every pixel goes. It's half science half art.
I'm not terribly impressed by either of the redraws, as mr mouths looks very much like a 5 second paintover. Ben's is nice, but there is something wrong i can't put my fingure on. Probably his head. I try not to exaggerate things too much, as i think it's a bit lazy. You can get a decent looking face with a smaller head. Look at the king's quest sprites. Look at guybrush. Look at him!!!

He may be taller, but he looks better proportioned. He also has an awesome dynamic looking pose. When I stand around doing nothing, i never have my hands parallel to my body. I may have one in my pocket, on my hip. He also has very excellent posture. Ben's looks like the world is coming crushing down on his sholders.
What is the character's story. Maybe this will help with your design. Create a backstory. Give this man a life, then bring him to life.
Oh and i almost forgot.
How I pick my skin colours.

Nice isn't it.
I'm not terribly impressed by either of the redraws, as mr mouths looks very much like a 5 second paintover. Ben's is nice, but there is something wrong i can't put my fingure on. Probably his head. I try not to exaggerate things too much, as i think it's a bit lazy. You can get a decent looking face with a smaller head. Look at the king's quest sprites. Look at guybrush. Look at him!!!

He may be taller, but he looks better proportioned. He also has an awesome dynamic looking pose. When I stand around doing nothing, i never have my hands parallel to my body. I may have one in my pocket, on my hip. He also has very excellent posture. Ben's looks like the world is coming crushing down on his sholders.
What is the character's story. Maybe this will help with your design. Create a backstory. Give this man a life, then bring him to life.
Oh and i almost forgot.
How I pick my skin colours.

Nice isn't it.