I really like your latest version!
Methinks there are only some minor things you could improve on:
The shading on her forehead is a bit off, I don't think the shadow over her left brow is quite right.
The skin colours could do with more contrast.
And finally, the eyes are too blue in blue, she looks like a Fremen.
But you're nearly there!
Methinks there are only some minor things you could improve on:
The shading on her forehead is a bit off, I don't think the shadow over her left brow is quite right.
The skin colours could do with more contrast.
And finally, the eyes are too blue in blue, she looks like a Fremen.
But you're nearly there!