As Dan said, those drums are definetely all over the place.
Yeah don't ditch them entirely, they just need re-doing. The drums need some repetition for starters, and here the main drum part just stops for a second at an awkward timing, get rid of that and make it continious. The cymbals crash at all the wrong times. you should have them perhaps crash just the once at the end of every point where the keys loop in the first section. It's hard to explain without just doing it myself, but I hope you understood what I meant.
I like the keyboards though!
Yeah don't ditch them entirely, they just need re-doing. The drums need some repetition for starters, and here the main drum part just stops for a second at an awkward timing, get rid of that and make it continious. The cymbals crash at all the wrong times. you should have them perhaps crash just the once at the end of every point where the keys loop in the first section. It's hard to explain without just doing it myself, but I hope you understood what I meant.
I like the keyboards though!