just wanted to point out that somewhere is one word...and it makes more sense that way. Other than that, there was nothing I could find wrong with your corrections. Skurwy, it seems to me, your use of grammar and vocabulary already is much better than some of the people here, with English as a first language. The best way to improve grammar, though, is to read.
-MillsJROSS
-MillsJROSS