hey there, couple things that bother me about this image are listed below, won't you join me below this sentence?
Hi, glad you could make it! So here's my little edit:

there's an awkward halo around the majority of objects in the scene. here there's blue and green and brown around the black outline.


mine is on top yours is on the bottom [oh la la], see the little specks of light in the forest area? i took those out in mine, i only saw them when i enlarged it to full screen and they really bothered me. I'm kind of bothered by the black lines around the trees and such, not so much that they're there but that they're not ALWAYS there. Sometimes they completely disappear and the line is never completed.
I also think those mountains could use another pass, they look really flat to me and maybe if you defined a light source you could have shadows define the volume of the rocks
http://www.scit.wlv.ac.uk/~jphb/canada/pictures/castle.mountain.1.gif
any help?
well good luck and keep on keepin on cause it's looking good!
eric
Hi, glad you could make it! So here's my little edit:

there's an awkward halo around the majority of objects in the scene. here there's blue and green and brown around the black outline.


mine is on top yours is on the bottom [oh la la], see the little specks of light in the forest area? i took those out in mine, i only saw them when i enlarged it to full screen and they really bothered me. I'm kind of bothered by the black lines around the trees and such, not so much that they're there but that they're not ALWAYS there. Sometimes they completely disappear and the line is never completed.
I also think those mountains could use another pass, they look really flat to me and maybe if you defined a light source you could have shadows define the volume of the rocks
http://www.scit.wlv.ac.uk/~jphb/canada/pictures/castle.mountain.1.gif
any help?
well good luck and keep on keepin on cause it's looking good!
eric