Whoa guys, thanks for the replies 
I guess I'll try to put more variations and add a bit more instruments, some strings, oboe, maybe even a flute
As for the production issues, I'm afraid I can't do better with my intergrated sound card. I'll try to work on the piano sound, cut back on the reverb a bit, lose the echo and work on the dynamics.
@Viking
Thank you man, for in depth analysis. You got me thinking there
I'm getting to it right away 8)
If you like or don't like the piece, please let me know.

I guess I'll try to put more variations and add a bit more instruments, some strings, oboe, maybe even a flute

As for the production issues, I'm afraid I can't do better with my intergrated sound card. I'll try to work on the piano sound, cut back on the reverb a bit, lose the echo and work on the dynamics.
@Viking
Thank you man, for in depth analysis. You got me thinking there

I'm getting to it right away 8)
If you like or don't like the piece, please let me know.
